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The image shows a line graph comparing visitors to Cardiff and Dublin from 2010 to 2020. Visitors to Cardiff in millions: 2010 (1), 2011 (1.5), 2012 (2), 2013 (2.5), 2014 (2), 2015 (3), 2016 (2.5), 2017 (3), 2018 (3.5), 2019 (4), 2020 (5.5). Visitors to Dublin in millions: 2010 (5.5), 2011 (4.5), 2012 (4), 2013 (3), 2014 (3.5), 2015 (3), 2016 (3), 2017 (3.5), 2018 (3), 2019 (2.5), 2020 (3).

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The line graph illustrates data on people who travelled in two different cities-Cardiff and Dublin-between 2010 and 2020.

Overall, Dublin site went from being the most visited city to the least, whereas the reverse was seen in Cardiff city.

Dublin city experienced a full, but this was not stuble throughout the period. Initially, it was the most popular among whales, studying approximately 4 million in 2011 and went to down and up to around 3 million, while its figure dropped slightly to 2 million in 2020.

By contrast, tourism in Cardiff followed the opposite trend with under 2 million in 2011. Also, this figure stayed stable for 7 years. However, from 2018 onward, Carfiff city began to soar in comes and by 2019 suppassed Dublin city, ending the period at its peak of roughly 5 millions

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and key data points from the graph. The overall trends are identified, and there is an attempt to compare and contrast the data for Cardiff and Dublin. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately represented and consider adding more specific details to support the overall trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overall statement are clear, but the body paragraphs contain some abrupt transitions and lack clear connections between sentences. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the data. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be refined to better group related information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('whales' instead of 'visitors', 'stuble' instead of 'stable'). Expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and comparisons would enhance the report. Focus on using more accurate and specific language to convey the information.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. While the overall meaning is understandable, these errors detract from the report's impact. Pay close attention to grammar rules and sentence structure to improve accuracy. For example, 'Dublin city experienced a full' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Also, 'Carfiff city began to soar in comes' is not accurate.

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