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Band 5+: Task 1: The plans show a student common room from five years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two floor plans for a 'Student common room'. The '5 years ago' plan contained: 1 cupboard, 1 sink, 2 benches, 1 microwave, 1 refrigerator, 1 bookshelf, 4 round tables, and 18 chairs (distributed as 4, 5, 4, and 5 chairs per table). The 'now' plan contains: 1 cupboard, 1 sink, 1 bench, 2 microwaves, 1 refrigerator, 1 drinks machine, 1 television, 2 armchairs, 1 bench for laptops, 1 rectangular table with 10 chairs, and 2 round tables with 4 and 5 chairs respectively, for a total of 19 chairs at tables.

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The map show how communal area for students changed after 5 years.

Overall, communal area underwent several modifications and became more convinient with the addition of furnitures and several household equipments.

A half decade ago, students communal layout has less opportunities. A roowas designed with four round tables, which could fit maximum 24 pupils. Cooking related sections including: cupboard, sink, two benches, microwave and fridge were positioned on the north side. Additionally, there was bookseld on the bottom of east corner.

At present, student common layout experienced several reconstructions. First, two round tables were replaced with on rectangular. This saves space for other new conveniences such as bench for laptops at the south side amd drinks machine on the north side. Bookseld was replaced with furniture and television on the right bottom corner. In the cooking area which is positioned on the top, one of benches was was reconstructed to another microwave.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons between the two plans. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies in the details provided. To improve, ensure all key features are mentioned and that the data is accurately represented. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure for clearer communication.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related ideas. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs to improve readability.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('convinient,' 'opportunities,' 'reconstructions'). Expanding your vocabulary and focusing on using more accurate and specific terms would enhance the clarity and impact of your writing. For example, instead of 'convinient,' consider 'functional' or 'well-equipped.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofreading carefully and seeking feedback on your writing can help identify and correct these errors.

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