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Band 4+: Task: The chart below shows the percentage of households in three different countries (Country A, Country B, and Country C) that had access to the Internet from 2000 to 2020. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows percentage growth over time in three countries from 2000 to 2020 with data points at five-year intervals: Country A starts at 10% in 2000, grows to 30% in 2005, rises further to 50% in 2010, reaches 70% in 2015, and peaks at 90% in 2020; Country B begins at 20% in 2000, progresses to 40% in 2005, climbs to 60% in 2010, continues to 80% in 2015, and culminates at 100% in 2020; Country C is initially at 15% in 2000, increases to 25% in 2005, advances to 35% in 2010, goes up to 55% in 2015, and ends at 80% in 2020.

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The chart depicts about the internet connectivity of households in three different countries like A, B, and C over the two decades from 2000 to 2020. The unit of measurement is percentages.

Overall, the internet access in all three countries gradually increasing over the time. Country B have the highest level of connections, while, country C have the lowest connections of an internet. Overall, the gap between the countries narrowed down.

By 2000, country B showed high number of household internet connections of 15%, hence, country C showed lower number of connections with just 2% lower from country A. By 2005, country A and B showed a significant rise in internet access from 25% and 35% respectively. Country C still lagging behind. By 2010, the gap narrowed down between A and B toward the increasing trends of household broadband connections, Country A just 10% far from B,on the other side, Country C also showed a dramatic rise in internet connections from 30% as compared to the 2005.

By 2015, Coutry A and B percentages continously increased from 75% to 85% accordingly, but country C at 45%. By 2020, showed the most significant surge in percentages of household broadband connections in all three countries A, B and C from 85%, 95% and 70% respectively,

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 10

connections: 7

internet: 6

showed: 5

countries: 4

three: 3

household: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and attempts to describe the trends and data for all three countries. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy. Many of the figures provided in the report do not align with the information provided in the visual description (for example, the starting percentages and the final values in 2020). While the report identifies the general upward trend, the inconsistencies in the data points make the description unreliable. To improve, ensure that you carefully transcribe the numbers from the chart and focus on grouping data logically to highlight comparisons rather than just listing figures. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy, particularly subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report follows a chronological order, which is appropriate for this task. However, the progression of ideas is hindered by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are fragmented (e.g., 'Country C still lagging behind'). To improve, ensure that every sentence is a complete thought and use a wider variety of linking words (such as 'In contrast', 'Furthermore', or 'Subsequently') to connect your observations more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and occasionally inaccurate. There are instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'lowest connections of an internet' and 'just 10% far from B'. While you attempted to use some descriptive verbs like 'narrowed down' and 'surge', the range is not sufficient to convey complex trends accurately. Aim to use more precise academic collocations, such as 'a steady increase', 'a significant disparity', or 'reached a peak'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Country B have' instead of 'has'), tense consistency (mixing present and past), and sentence structure (e.g., 'By 2020, showed the most significant surge...' lacks a subject). Additionally, punctuation errors, such as comma splices and missing commas, disrupt the flow. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures, ensuring every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and practicing correct subject-verb agreement.

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