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Band 5+: The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • explain what the problem is • suggest how it can be fixed • say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

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Dear Makia Abelleja

I am writing this letter because I have discovered some defects on your apartment room

First I would like to introduce myself my name is Wilber A Padaong I am your new renter of your apartment roon in lasvegas

first I would like to explaine you want is the detefect repair in your apartment roon is your toilet and also the window in my room because I can’t sleep at the night and I don’t want to use my toilet.

I would like you to call or send the expert people to fix this problem immediately because I want to use my toilet in my room if you call the expert people for sure the work he made it is very beautiful and successful.

Last please dubble check the inside of the room the window the selling and also the toilet because if they all okey you are not to bother to fix the defects.

I am looking forward to meeting you again.

Yours sincerely a bullakon

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 4

apartment: 3

would: 3

toilet: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the problems and suggestions for fixing them could be clearer and more detailed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow of ideas could be improved. The numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is simple and repetitive. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's effectiveness.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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Band 5+: The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • explain what the problem is • suggest how it can be fixed • say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

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