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Band 6+: The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • explain what the problem is • suggest how it can be fixed • say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

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Dear Robert, sir,

I am writing this letter to you regarding the condition of the accommodation that I rented recently. Although, I believe

the repairs were done last month, but still there are major loopholes left.

First of all, the mold in both washrooms of my place is still there, and secondly, the wooden door at the entrance is noisy and often gets stuck when in use. If

I suggest, you could hire a good

repair person to fix all of this by this week, rather than trying to fix everything yourself.

Moreover, there are many people in my contact list who could help you to fix these issues and check other things in the house as well. Otherwise, I will vacate this accommodation by the end of this month.

Hoping for a positive response and cooperation on your side.

Yours faithfully,

Prachi Chopra

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The issues are clearly explained, solutions are suggested, and a desired outcome is stated. Minor improvements in clarity and formality would enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear. The structure could be improved with more logical paragraphing and smoother transitions between ideas. The threat to vacate feels somewhat abrupt.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient but could be more precise and sophisticated in places. More varied and impactful word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. A wider range of grammatical structures and more consistent punctuation would improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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