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Band 6+: The bar chart below compares the main modes of transport used by people to travel to work in London in 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Main Mode of Transport to Work in London (2000 vs 2020)' which shows the 'Percentage of Commuters' for four transport modes. For the year 2000, the data is: Car 60%, Public Transport 25%, Bicycle 5%, and Walking 10%. For the year 2020, the data is: Car 50%, Public Transport 30%, Bicycle 10%, and Walking 10%.

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The graph illustrates the proportion of commuters using various modes of transport as primary options for the work, in London. It compares the data from the years 2000 and 2020.

Overall, the percentage of commuters using different modes of transport is relatively higher in the year 2020 than the year 2000, due to more availability and affordability of the different vehicles.

Through the graph we can infer that a large proportion of the commuters use cars i.e 60%, however bicycle is the one that is least preferred by the workers which is 5% during the year 2000. Whereas In the year 2020, it is also the same that cars are the most used mode of transport with 50% of commuters, while the least opted modes of transport are walking and bicycle with 10% of commuters. However the public transport has moderate usage with about 25% of commuters in the year 2000 and 30% of commuters in the year 2020.

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commuters: 7

transport: 5

modes: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main points of the graph and provides a general overview of the trends in transportation modes between 2000 and 2020. However, the overview statement is not entirely accurate, as not all modes of transport saw an increase in usage in 2020 compared to 2000 (e.g., car usage decreased). To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and nuanced overview that captures the key trends, including both increases and decreases. Also, ensure that all significant data points are mentioned and compared.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The 'Overall' paragraph makes a generalization that isn't entirely supported by the data (not all modes increased in 2020). The report would benefit from clearer transitions between discussing the data for 2000 and 2020. Consider structuring the report to compare each mode of transport across the two years in separate paragraphs for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'mode of transport' or 'commuters,' try incorporating synonyms or rephrasing to enhance the lexical richness. Also, avoid informal language such as 'i.e.'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, the sentence structure in the third paragraph is somewhat convoluted. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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