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Band 4+: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts two clustered bar graphs representing the population distribution in cities, towns, and rural areas in Australia for people born in the country and those born outside in the years 1995 and 2010. In 1995, People born in Australia had around 54 in cities, 40 in towns, and 5 in rural areas, while those born outside Australia had approximately 20 in cities, 30 in towns, and 8 in rural areas. In 2010, People born in Australia had 70, over 45, and less than 5 for cities, towns, and rural areas; those born outside Australia had 18, 25, and less than 5, respectively.

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The given two bar charts shows the difference between fraction of people which were born in Australia and bore other part of the world residing in urban, rural and town areas between 1995 and 2010.

Most of the population lives in the cities in both the charts, as well as they have increased in recent time compare to 1995 for both type of people. There is a slight decrease in people who lived in towns in 1995 to the people who are currently residing there which were born in australia. Also there is minor to no change of non-australian born population lived in towns in 1995 to 2010. The major and tremendous change is in the population of the rural areas for both type of people.

In the nutshell, we can clearly say that in recent time majority of the human-being tends to relocate towards cities and not priorities the rural areas.tThere should be not a problem in such as everyone priorities the city to find better work and life.

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Task Response

The response provides a general overview of the main features of the bar chart, but it lacks specific data comparisons and does not fully address the changes over time. The report should focus more on the specific data presented in the visual information.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat varied, but there are instances of imprecise word choices and awkward phrasing. The report lacks the precise and sophisticated vocabulary expected at this level. There is also a need for more accurate and appropriate use of vocabulary to convey the information effectively.

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While a range of structures is attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors and awkward phrasing throughout the report. Punctuation and sentence structure need improvement for better accuracy and coherence. More complex structures could also be used to enhance the overall quality of the report.

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