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Band 5+: The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the informarion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart detailing five industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy for 2009, 2019, and a projection for 2029. Finance shows 30% in 2009, 35% in 2019, and 40% in 2029. Food processing starts at 10% in 2009, increases to 20% in 2019, and remains steady with a projection of 20% in 2029. Manufacturing holds steady at 15% for both 2009 and 2019 before a slight decrease to 10% projected in 2029. Tourism accounts for 25% in 2009, decreases to 20% in 2019, and is projected to reduce further to 5% in 2029. Oil, coal, and gas make up 20% in 2009, remains at 25% in 2019, and then returns to 20% in 2029.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the information about five various sectors of Brazil’s economy between 2009 and 2019 and the proportions for next ten years.

Overall, finance field demonstrates increase, while items’ production sector follows decrease. There is a fluctuation in food and non-renewable energy industries. Tourism and hosting makes up a decrease and plateau.

In detail, Brazil’s capital grew up in the past within given period and this rise will continue. The indicator for this field grew up by nearly 6% during 2009 and 2019. It will reach over 40% until 2029. In contrast, manufacturing shows decrease from approximately 21% to 16% and will go down next 10 years diving to 5%.

The figures for food fabrication made up a rise by around 11% from 2009 to 2019, while the numbers are expected fell to the same level which was in 2009. Another fluctuation was depicted for energy industry. The numbers for first decade grew up by 5%, whereas next 10 years they will drop from above 30% to below 30%. Tourism in Brazil remained just above a quarter in 2009; however it fell slightly until 2019 to just above fifth and will stabilise at the same level during next 10 years.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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years: 3

above: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends and making some comparisons, but it contains several inaccuracies and vague descriptions that detract from clarity. For example, the figures for manufacturing and energy are not aligned with the data (e.g., manufacturing is stated as decreasing from 21% to 16%, while the data shows 15% in both 2009 and 2019). The overview is somewhat unclear, and some categories (e.g., 'items' production sector' and 'food fabrication') are not precisely named. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key features and trends, use precise industry names, and ensure comparisons are clear and data-specific. Avoid vague terms like 'just above a quarter' when exact percentages are available.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organise information by providing an overview and then detailing each sector, but the flow is disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In detail', 'The figures for food fabrication made up a rise'). Paragraphing is present but not skilfully managed, as the second paragraph mixes different sectors without clear separation. To improve, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that comparisons between years and sectors are logically connected. Avoid abrupt transitions and ensure that each sentence builds on the previous one smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks the range and precision expected for a higher band score. There are some attempts at variation (e.g., 'fluctuation', 'stabilise'), but many terms are informal or imprecise (e.g., 'grew up', 'diving to', 'made up a rise'). The report would benefit from using more formal and accurate vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'remained stable', 'projected to rise'). Avoid colloquial expressions and ensure that terms like 'plateau' are used correctly. A wider range of synonyms and more sophisticated lexical choices would enhance the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include 'the numbers are expected fell' (missing 'to'), 'diving to 5%' (incorrect verb form), and 'The figures for food fabrication made up a rise' (unclear phrasing). Punctuation is mostly correct, but sentence structures are often repetitive or incomplete. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb tenses. Proofreading for common errors such as missing prepositions and incorrect verb forms is essential.

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