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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows how exports from one country were transported in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph showing the percentage of total exports from one country by mode of transport (sea, air, road) from 2010-2012; In 2010, sea transport accounted for over 50%, air transport was around 25%, and road transport was around 12%; In 2011, sea transport decreased to around 47%, air transport increased to over 30%, and road transport remained around 12%; In 2012, sea transport increased to over 55%, air transport decreased to around 20%, and road transport decreased to around 10%.

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The chart above handles the three different transportation methods which were used by one country. The datas are taken from the years between the 2010 and 2012.

It can be deduced from the graphic that some transportation practices raised linearly while others decreased or fluctuated in the period of 2 years.

Taking the year 2010 into consideration that products transported via sea consisted of the more than 40 percent and this ratio continued its growth steadly until 2012. However, Air transportation stooding at nearly 25 percent dropped significantly to the below 20 percent in just 2 years. In this time period, road transportation decreased from 20 percent to almost 10 percent in a year but it was able to jump over to nearly 15 percent in 2012.

It can be concluded that, the popular transportation method among these 3 practices was the sea with its nearly 10 percent rise. While the usage of air and road transportation practices declined, road transportation got itself up in 2012.

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The report covers the main trends and makes some comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that in 2010, products transported via sea consisted of more than 40 percent, but the visual description states that it was over 50 percent. Also, the report mentions that road transportation decreased from 20 percent to almost 10 percent in a year, but the visual description states that in 2010, road transport was around 12%. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and consistent with the visual information provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The introduction is brief but lacks a clear overview of the main trends. The body paragraphs present data but lack clear connections between the years and modes of transport. The conclusion summarizes the main points but could be more concise and impactful. To improve coherence, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and transition words to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Consider grouping information by mode of transport or by year to create a more logical structure.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a mix of basic and more advanced vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('handles,' 'stooding'). The range of vocabulary is adequate but could be expanded to describe trends and comparisons more effectively. To enhance lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to transportation and data analysis. For example, instead of 'raised linearly,' you could say 'increased steadily.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('datas are taken,' 'transportation stooding'), subject-verb agreement issues ('products transported via sea consisted'), and awkward phrasing ('jump over to nearly 15 percent'). These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors before submitting the report.

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