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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in different income groups that had internet access in 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar chart with household internet access percentages segmented by income groups for the years 2010 and 2020. In the lowest income group, 2010 shows approximately 21% access, while 2020 shows about 42%. The second income group demonstrates 52% in 2010 and 72% in 2020. The third group indicates around 65% in 2010 and approximately 85% in 2020. The highest income group shows about 80% in 2010 and 95% in 2020.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of households in various income groups that had internet access from 2010 to 2020.

Overall, what can be seen from the bar chart is that lowest internet connection from the lowest category by households in both years. Another interesting point is that third one was the highest percentages rather than the highest.

To begin with, lowest internet access around 38 per cent and 44 per cent. It was the lowest connection between four different income groups. However, the maximum connection was the third one rather than the higest income group. Nevertheless , it was reached a peak around 83 pe cent connections by households.

On the other hand, the second and the highest category were almost equal among 58% and 75% respectively.

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internet: 3

connection: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to summarize the main features of the bar chart but contains inaccuracies and lacks clarity. The organization is weak, and the language used is not always precise. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using more precise language to describe the trends and comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The 'overall' paragraph is vague and doesn't effectively summarize the main trends. The subsequent paragraphs contain disjointed sentences and unclear transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between income groups and years. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related ideas together. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Furthermore') to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words like 'lowest,' 'highest,' and 'connection.' The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more precisely and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'lowest internet connection,' consider using 'least internet penetration' or 'smallest proportion of households with internet access.' Instead of 'reached a peak,' try 'peaked' or 'attained its highest level.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'lowest internet connection from the lowest category' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is also quite simple, limiting the complexity of the analysis. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, to express ideas more effectively. Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors.

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