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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households that owned rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image is a bar chart titled "% of households owned by rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011", with a vertical axis from 0 to 40. The data presented for each year is: 1918, 10%; 1939, approximately 21%; 1951, approximately 14%; 1961, approximately 17%; 1971, 30%; 1981, approximately 34%; 1991, approximately 38%; 2001, approximately 37%; and 2011, approximately 35%.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of households that rented accommodations in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall, it can clearly be seen that before 1971 a few people lived in rented accommodations compared to after 1971. It is also notable that individuals rented the most living spaces in 1991.

To begin with, the figure was at only 10% at the beginning of the period. However, it increased rapidly reaching about 21% in 1939, after which it fell to roughly 14% in 1951. It rose slightly to 17% in 1961, and then climbed sharply to 30% in 1971.

Starting from 1971, the figure grew steadily, accounting for around 33% in 1981, reaching its peak 38% in 1991. Then in 2001, it experienced a slight decline in roughly 1%. The percentage was a bit lower at the end of the given period standing at about 35%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and making comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. The data is generally accurate, though there is a minor inaccuracy in the description of the 2001 figure (a slight decline of roughly 1% from 38% to 37% is correct, but the phrasing could be clearer). The report could be improved by using more precise language for data changes and ensuring all figures are correctly referenced. Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the key features appropriately. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall statement and logical grouping of data. The use of cohesive devices is effective, though a few transitions could be smoother. Paragraphing is appropriate, but ensure that the second paragraph clearly separates the two main time periods.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the task, with good use of synonyms (e.g., 'rented accommodations', 'living spaces', 'figure'). Some phrases could be more precise (e.g., 'decline in roughly 1%' could be 'decline of about 1 percentage point'), but overall the lexical range is strong. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate usage. Minor errors and phrasing issues are present (e.g., 'rented accommodations' should be 'rented accommodation' as an uncountable noun, and 'in roughly 1%' should be 'by roughly 1%'), but they do not impede understanding. Overall, the grammar is controlled and accurate.

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