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Band 5+: the bar chart below shows the percentage of young people aged 18-25 in five countries who use social media daily in 2010 and 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Social media use among young adults in different countries," with a vertical axis labeled "percentaius" from 0 to 100, showing the "% using social media daily" for the years 2010 and 2020. The data for each country is as follows: Japan, 2010: ~43%, 2020: ~63%; Italy, 2010: ~59%, 2020: ~71%; UK, 2010: ~64%, 2020: ~77%; USA, 2010: ~67%, 2020: 80%; Turkey, 2010: ~73%, 2020: ~88%.

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The bar chart illustrate the percentage of young adults in different countries in 2010 and 2020 who use social media ten years period

Overall, Japan had the lowest percentage in 2010. However Japan rose sharply by 35% in 2020

Taking a look another Asian country. Turkey is the highest proportion both 2010 and 2020.

Nevertheless Turkey has the smallest increase with 20%, it was followed by the UK and the USA which is showing the same rate of growth

By the end of the period Japan remained the lowest percentage but showed the highest growth while Turkey maintained its leasing position. The other countries showed little change in their rankings

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 3

japan: 3

turkey: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the bar chart and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the increase for Japan is closer to 20% rather than 35%, and the growth for the UK and USA are not exactly the same). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and consider including more specific data points to support your overall summary. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and identifies some key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping countries based on similar trends or regions to enhance coherence. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more varied to avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeatedly stating 'in 2010' and 'in 2020,' use alternative phrases or implied references to the time periods.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of saying 'rose sharply by 35%,' you could use more descriptive phrases like 'increased significantly by 35 percentage points.' Also, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The bar chart illustrate' should be 'The bar chart illustrates.' Also, 'Taking a look another Asian country' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'Taking a look at another Asian country.' Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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