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Band 5+: the bar chart below shows the percentage of young people aged 18-25 in five countries who use social media daily in 2010 and 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Social media use among young adults in different countries," with a vertical axis labeled "percentaius" from 0 to 100, showing the "% using social media daily" for the years 2010 and 2020. The data for each country is as follows: Japan, 2010: ~43%, 2020: ~63%; Italy, 2010: ~59%, 2020: ~71%; UK, 2010: ~64%, 2020: ~77%; USA, 2010: ~67%, 2020: 80%; Turkey, 2010: ~73%, 2020: ~88%.

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This bar chart provides information about the percentage of young people aged 18-25 in five countries who use social media daily in 2010 and 2020.

Overall, the percent of using social media from 2010 to 2020 are growing in all countries, but using social media among young adults in 2010 have different values in all countries, and, because, of that, in 2020 there are also different percentage in each country.

Firstly, graph shows that the percent of encouraging in social life between the people aged 18-25 are raising in all countries, but the difference between different countries is mostly the same, for instance, in 2010 in Japan there are near 43% of young people who live their social life, but in 2020 there are 63%, so the difference is near to 20%. Moreover, in Turkey in 2010 there are 70% of using social media, but in 2020 there are near 90%, that means that difference is also 20%.

However, the values of using social media in 2010 are different in each country. For example, in 2010 in Italy there are 58%, but in the same time in the USA there are more than 65%. And, because, of that, in 2020 there are also different values in each country, for instance, in Italy there are 70%, but in the USA there are 80%.

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there: 10

social: 7

countries: 5

media: 5

different: 5

using: 4

young: 3

people: 3

values: 3

difference: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the general upward trend and providing specific data points for comparison. However, the overview is somewhat repetitive, and the description of the data is occasionally imprecise. To improve, focus on using more varied vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'increased significantly' or 'rose steadily') and ensure that the comparisons between countries are more clearly structured. Avoid repetitive phrasing such as 'because of that' and aim for more sophisticated cohesive devices to link your observations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by repetitive phrasing and awkward transitions. The use of cohesive devices like 'Moreover' and 'However' is present, but the logical flow is interrupted by redundant explanations (e.g., repeating that values are different in each country). To improve, try to group data more logically - for example, by comparing the magnitude of growth across countries rather than simply stating that they are all different. Avoid using 'And, because, of that' as a transition, as it is grammatically incorrect and disrupts the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and often used inaccurately. There are several instances of word choice errors that obscure meaning, such as 'the percent of encouraging in social life' and 'young people who live their social life,' which do not accurately reflect the data regarding social media usage. To improve, focus on using precise academic verbs and nouns related to trends, such as 'increased,' 'rose,' 'proportion,' 'percentage,' and 'usage.' Avoid repeating the same words (like 'different' and 'values') too frequently.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally make the meaning difficult to follow. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the percent... are growing' should be 'is growing') and sentence structure (e.g., 'in 2010 in Japan there are near 43%'). The use of punctuation is also problematic, particularly with unnecessary commas around 'because of that.' To improve, practice using complex sentence structures more accurately and ensure that subject-verb agreement is maintained throughout the report.

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