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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart titled Instagram Influencers (in millions) comparing follower counts in 2018 and 2021. For Cristiano Ronaldo: 2018 count is 150, 2021 count is 315; The Rock: 2018 count is 120, 2021 count is 250; Ariana Grande: 2018 count is 135, 2021 count is 240; Kylie Jenner: 2018 count is 125, 2021 count is 230; Selena Gomez: 2018 count is 130, 2021 count is 225.

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The bar chart illustrates key information about the most popular celebrities in instgram during the period between 2018 – 2021 .

Overall, it is clear from the chart that in2021 Cristiano Ronaldo is the most followed celebrity in the world with 320 millions followers(approximately) , which proves that Ronaldo surpassed rest of the list by more than 50 millions , the others are close to each other with followers for istance The Rock and Ariana grande almost have the same number of followers.

According to what is shown Ronaldo’s followrs increased sharply during the three years , number of followers increased by 200 million followers, on the other hand Selena Gomes was the most popular face in instgram in 2018 with130 millions follower, how ever unlike the others Selena’s growth was the least in terms of followes in 2021, because she incresed by100 million follower not as same as the rest of them, for example Kyle Jenner she had by 2021 250 million follower.

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The report covers the main features of the bar chart and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Selena Gomez being the most popular in 2018, Kylie Jenner's followers in 2021). To improve, ensure data accuracy and provide more specific comparisons between all celebrities mentioned.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more accurately to link ideas within and between sentences.

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The vocabulary is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('instgram', 'followrs'). There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always precise. Expand your vocabulary related to trends and comparisons to enhance the report.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity.

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