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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the proportion of individuals possessing smartphones in five different countries from 2015 to 2020.

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The image presents a bar chart comparing smartphone ownership percentages for the years 2015 and 2020 across five countries: Country A shows 60% in 2015 and 90% in 2020; Country B reports 40% in 2015 and 75% in 2020; Country C marks 18% in 2015 and 35% in 2020; Country D holds a consistent 35% in both 2015 and 2020; Country E indicates 30% in 2015 and 52% in 2020.

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The bar chart illustrate the percentage of individuals using smartphones in five different countries between 2015 and 2020.

Overall, in the bar chart we can see that the most smatrphone users were in 2020 in country A. However, the fewer people were in 2015 in country C. Moreover, the difference between five countries was substantial.

In 2015, in country A was reached 60 proportion, whereas in 2020 the figure was increased dramatically, at about 90%. In country B, the situation was worse, in 2015 and 2020 the rate of smatrphone ownership in this country achieved 40 and 75 percentage respectively. In country C, the statistics was reached 18% in 2015, however data was changed to 35 portion in 2020.

In country D, the percentage of phone users was nearly a third portion in 2015, In addition, the figure increased significantly to approximately three quarters in 2020. Additionally, in the last country E, difference was minor is about 30 and 52 percentages in 2015 and 2020 respectively.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides data for all five countries, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. Specifically, the description for Country D claims a significant increase to 'three quarters' (75%), which contradicts the visual description stating the figure remained consistent at 35%. Additionally, the overview is somewhat repetitive and lacks a high-level summary of the main trends (such as the general upward trend in most countries). To improve, ensure that the trends described match the data provided and focus on grouping information logically to highlight comparisons rather than just listing figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by repetitive sentence structures and awkward transitions. To improve, try to use a wider variety of cohesive devices and ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next. Avoid starting too many sentences with simple prepositional phrases like 'In country X...'; instead, try to integrate the subject and the trend more fluidly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are several instances of incorrect word forms, such as using 'proportion' or 'portion' as nouns in ways that do not sound natural (e.g., '60 proportion' or '35 portion'). Additionally, there are spelling errors like 'smatrphone'. To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'surged', 'remained stable', 'climbed') and ensure that units like 'percentage' or 'proportion' are used correctly within the context of the sentence.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'chart illustrate', 'statistics was reached'), incorrect sentence constructions (e.g., 'in country A was reached 60 proportion'), and improper use of articles. There is also a lack of control over complex sentence structures. Focus on mastering basic sentence patterns, particularly how to use 'there was/were' or how to make the country the subject of the sentence (e.g., 'Country A reached 60%').

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