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Band 5+: the bar chart gives information about the life expectancy in Japan, Korea, the USA, and Indonesia, and the table shows the change in life expectancy between 1953 and 2008.

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The image features a bar chart showing life expectancy in 2008 for Japan (82), Korea (78), USA (76), and Indonesia (70), plus a table detailing life expectancy increases from 1953 to 2008 for Japan (+33.5), Korea (+12.5), USA (+3), and Indonesia (+15.7).

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The bar chart provides data about the life expectancy of people who were born in 4 different countries while the tallest illustrates the change in life expectancy from 1953 to 2008.

Overall,over the period time frame the highest and lowest countries in life expectancy were Japan and Indonesia.As for table it is clear that the major changes in life expectancy was in Indonesia

Looking at the details as regards life expectancy in Japan it made up more than 80 years,which was the much higher than other countries.With respect to Korea it was nearly 78 years in life expectancy and the United States around 77 years. The lowest one was Indonesia at 70 years.

Looking at the table,Japan and the United States had the same change in life expectancy around 3 years.Indonesia life expectancy increased dramatically by 15 over the period 55 years.Korea the second country by the grows which was 12.5

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The report covers the main points of the bar chart and table, providing a reasonable overview of the life expectancy data for the four countries. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions that could be improved. To improve, ensure that you accurately represent the data provided in the visual and avoid misinterpretations. Also, proofread carefully to correct grammatical errors and improve clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. The introduction mentions both the bar chart and the table but doesn't clearly set the stage for the comparison. The 'overall' statement is vague and doesn't provide a strong summary. Paragraphing could be improved to separate the discussion of the bar chart and the table more distinctly. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'tallest' instead of 'table'). To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to describing data, trends, and comparisons. Focus on using more specific and descriptive language to convey the information accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy throughout the report. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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