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Band 6+: The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development.

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The image shows the distribution of employment by sector with Japan having approximately 3% in agriculture, 25% in industry, and 72% in services; Brazil with roughly 18% in agriculture, 27% in industry, and 55% in services; India with about 60% in agriculture, 18% in industry, and 22% in services.

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The chart gives information on proportion of people from Japan Brazil and India who are involved in three sectors of economics at different levels of development.

Overall, the vast majority of Indian people are involved in agricultural sector, but considerably less in the others two sectors, while Japanese employees have a highest percentage of participation in service sector. In contrast, Brazil has an average percentage of people in every sector.

From the first glance, it can be seen that 60% of people from India are interested in agricultural sector, in contrast, substantially fewerJapanese employees are involved, only 5%. Meanwhile, the percentage of Brazilian people accounts for 25% in agricultural sector.

Regarding to service sector, Japan has the highest percentage of people, approximately about 60%. Slightly fewer people from Brazil are involved in this sector with the proportion of 50%, and India has the lowest percentage of people in service sector, only 25%. Industrial sector is the least popular in comparison with others. Only 35% of Japanese people are interested and 25% of Brazilian, while employees from India make up only 10%.

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people: 9

sector: 7

percentage: 5

india: 4

involved: 4

brazil: 3

agricultural: 3

employees: 3

service: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and comparing the three countries across the sectors. The structure is clear, with an introduction, an overall statement, and paragraphs for each sector. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Japan's agriculture at 5% instead of 3%, services at 60% instead of 72%, industry at 35% instead of 25%; Brazil's agriculture at 25% instead of 18%, services at 50% instead of 55%, industry at 25% instead of 27%; India's services at 25% instead of 22%, industry at 10% instead of 18%). These inaccuracies, while not detracting from the overall task achievement, could be improved for precision. Additionally, some phrasing is informal or imprecise (e.g., 'interested in' instead of 'employed in', 'the others two sectors' instead of 'the other two sectors', 'Regarding to' instead of 'Regarding'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and use more formal, precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'the others two sectors', 'From the first glance'). The paragraphing is adequate but could be more logically organized, for example by grouping sectors or countries more systematically. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'involved in', 'accounts for', 'make up'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'interested in' used for employment, 'percentage of people' repeated). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'employed in', 'constitute', 'account for'). Also, avoid informal or imprecise expressions like 'from the first glance'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('in agricultural sector' should be 'in the agricultural sector'), incorrect comparatives ('the others two sectors' should be 'the other two sectors'), and subject-verb agreement issues. There are also punctuation problems, such as missing commas after introductory phrases. To improve, focus on sentence structure, article usage, and proofreading for common errors. Using a wider range of complex structures accurately would also enhance the score.

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