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Band 7+: The bar chart illustrates five different inductries' percentage share of Country B's economy in 1995 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025.

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The image displays a bar chart detailing five industries’ share of Country B's economy across selected years: Finance: 2005 (30%), 2015 (35%), 2025 (approximately 43%); Food Processing: 2005 (just under 5%), 2015 (just over 10%), 2025 (under 5%); Manufacturing: 2005 (nearly 15%), 2015 (approximately 10%), 2025 (below 15%); Tourism: 2005 (around 25%), 2015 (20%), 2025 (25%); Oil, Coal, and Gas: 2005 (25%), 2015 (over 30%), 2025 (approximately 20%).

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The bar chart shows the percentage shares of five different sectors in Country B’s economy in 2005 and 2015 with predictions for 2025.

Overall, it is clear that finance sector was the largest throughout the period and it expected to become more dominant in the future. By contrast, manufacturing shows the most sharply decline trend and predicted to become the smallest industry. Food processing and the oil, coal and gas industry are expected fluctuation; whereas tourism decreased and then become stable.

To begin with, finance accounted for just over 30% of the economy in 2005, considerably more than manufacturing and food processing. This figure increased to approximately 37% in 2015 and predicted to reach 42% in 2025. In comparison, manufacturing declined from around 21% to 16% ; after expected fall to 5%. Thus, the difference between these two industries will become much bigger.

Moving on to the remaining industries, food processing doubled from 11% in 2005 to 21% in 2015. However, this growth is not continue, since the figure will return to stable figure at 11% in 2025. In addition, before falling back to initial level, the share of oil, coal and gas increased from around 26% to 31%. Tourism started at around 26%, although its contribution declined to 21% in 2015. This figure is predicted to be unchanged in 2025.

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figure: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and compares the sectors appropriately. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., finance starting at 30% instead of 30% in 2005, but the visual description says 2005 for finance is 30%? Actually the visual description says 2005 for finance is 30%, but the task says 1995 and 2015 with forecast for 2025, so there is a mismatch. The student used 2005, 2015, 2025 which is consistent with the visual description but not the task. Also, some data points are off (e.g., manufacturing starting at 21% instead of nearly 15%). The report could be more precise with the years and data. Overall, it addresses the task requirements with some omissions and lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and logical progression. However, some transitions could be smoother, and there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the use of 'it expected' instead of 'it is expected' and 'after expected fall' which is awkward. Improving the flow between sentences and using cohesive devices more naturally would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly appropriate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'dominant', 'sharply decline trend'). However, there are some inaccuracies and unnatural phrases, such as 'sharply decline trend' (should be 'sharp declining trend' or 'sharp decline') and 'expected fluctuation' (should be 'expected to fluctuate'). Using a wider range of precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition would improve lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward constructions. Examples include: 'it expected' (missing 'is'), 'manufacturing shows the most sharply decline trend' (incorrect word form), 'after expected fall' (missing article), 'this growth is not continue' (incorrect verb form), and 'before falling back to initial level' (missing article). Punctuation is generally correct, but more attention to subject-verb agreement and verb tenses is needed.

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