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Band 4+: The bar chart shows percentages of three groups of australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing the percentage of three age groups of Australian children engaging in activities in 2012: Watching TV - 5 to 8 years (100%), 9 to 11 years (100%), 12 to 16 years (100%); Reading - 5 to 8 years (60%), 9 to 11 years (70%), 12 to 16 years (80%); Art - 5 to 8 years (95%), 9 to 11 years (95%), 12 to 16 years (80%); Riding the bike - 5 to 8 years (70%), 9 to 11 years (80%), 12 to 16 years (80%).

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The diagram illustrats a rate of three groups of Australian children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2012.

Overall, the highest rate activities between children was watching tv. In contrast, lowest percentage of activities was art.

Children who interested art had 60% between 5-8 age kids, also a dipping rate had children 12-16 years old (50%). Meanwhile, watching tv popular between all children, 12-16 years teenagers was have almost 100 rate. And 9-11 years old children had 95 percentage of this activities.

Reading had midlle between 65-70 percentages , same rate was children who had 9-11 yaers old and 12-16 years old (70%). Morever, riding the bike was popular among 12-16 age children they had 81 percentages. And also high rate had 5 to 8 years old kids.

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