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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the amount of money spent on two types of electronic items in country X. Summarise the information in the chart by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart illustrating sales in million dollars over years 2011 to 2015 for two categories: Computers and Smartphones in Country X; 2011 shows Computers at 35 million and Smartphones at 20 million; 2012 indicates Computers at 35 million and Smartphones at 22 million; 2013 exhibits Computers rising to 40 million and Smartphones inching to 25 million; 2014 reveals Computers at 48 million and Smartphones advancing to 30 million; 2015 peaks with Computers reaching 50 million and Smartphones at 38 million.

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The information about the amount of expenditure on two kinds of electronic commodities that are computers and digital phones in a nation from 2011 to 2015. The units are in millions dollars.

Overall, it is evident that the amount of money spent on computer was far more dominant, while least was disburse on smartphones. The outlays on smartphones started to climb in two eventual years.

To embark with, there had been difference of 20 million dollars between the spending on smartphones and computing machines in 2011. However, the count of money spent on mobiles was similar in both 2012 and 2013 years, witnessed as 10 lakh dollars. Additionally, the spending on computer devices ranged from approximately 35 ( in 2012 ) to 40 ( in 2013).

Shifting attention towards the outlays on mobile phones in 2014, which was less than the expenses of PC. Furthermore, the disbursement on computers was significantly higher Than the squander on smartphones in eventual year.

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The main features of the chart are summarized, but some minor details are missing or inaccurate. The comparison is present but could be more precise and detailed.

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The report's organization is understandable, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences lack a smooth connection to the preceding ones. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

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