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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart depicting "The Amount of Investment by Four London Museums" from June to October, with intervals of 100,000 pounds; History Museum investment: June-300,000, July-500,000, August-600,000, September-700,000, October-600,000; British Museum investment: June-200,000, July-400,000, August-500,000, September-600,000, October-700,000; National Museum investment: June-500,000, July-600,000, August-700,000, September-800,000, October-700,000; Science Museum investment: June-400,000, July-300,000, August-400,000, September-500,000, October-600,000.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money which was invested by 4 different museums in London over 5 mounths period from Lune to October.

Overall, in August the amount of invested money for British museum and History museum experienced the most dramatic growth. The Science museum’s invested money shows a gradual changes during the all period.

On August, British museum was the most money invested museum in London and reach the highest position approxomately at 700000. History museum show dramatic growth on August after two monthes of being unchanged and the amount was as much as 600000. Whilst the National museum showed modest growth to about 300000 on August. The Science museum remained relatively stable, fluctuating benweet 400000 and 500000.

On September, however, the landscape had shifted considerably and all the indicators declined steadily. Comparatively, only Science museum surged to become one of the most popular meseum between sponsors on September. The British museum maitained strong numbers at approximately 600000.

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museum: 9

money: 4

invested: 4

august: 4

amount: 3

british: 3

growth: 3

science: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the bar chart, but it contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. For example, it incorrectly states that the British Museum reached 700,000 in August (actual: 500,000) and that the National Museum showed modest growth to 300,000 in August (actual: 700,000). The overall trend description is also flawed, as it claims all indicators declined in September, which is not supported by the data. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features and trends, and avoid making unsupported claims. Ensure correct spelling and grammar (e.g., 'mounths' to 'months', 'Lune' to 'June').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear overall structure and logical progression. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the description jumps between months without a clear comparative framework. Use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message difficult to follow. Consider organizing the report by first giving an overview of trends, then describing each museum's pattern or comparing across months.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive (e.g., 'growth', 'changes', 'money invested'). There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'mounths', 'Lune', 'approxomately', 'benweet', 'meseum', 'maitained') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'dramatic growth', 'modest growth'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'rose sharply', 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined gradually') and ensure correct spelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'show' instead of 'showed'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect prepositions (e.g., 'On August' instead of 'In August'). Sentence structures are often incomplete or awkward. Punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures accurately and proofread for basic grammar and punctuation errors.

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