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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet

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The image shows a horizontal bar chart with three categories ActiveX, Java, and .Net across five weeks. Week 1: ActiveX 20, Java 40, .Net 50. Week 2: ActiveX 30, Java 50, .Net 80. Week 3: ActiveX 40, Java 70, .Net 100. Week 4: ActiveX 70, Java 90, .Net 120. Week 5: ActiveX 70, Java 70, .Net 130.

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The given bar chart represents the amount of downloads per week of three computer packages(ActiveX, Java, and Net) within 5 weeks period.

Overall, there are 2 different patterns among downloads of packages: fluctuation and stable rise. Interestingly, the ActiveX is the most popular software, while the Net is the least widespread.

To begin, there is an established upward trend in downloads of ActiveX. For instance, during the 1st week there were about 70 thousand of downloads, during the last week there were roughly 120 thousands. Likewise, the Java shows the same trend. For example, in the beginning there were only 45 thousands, however, by the end this number increased to 80 thousand.

The Net, in contrast, showed fluctuations throughout the period. For instance, in the 1st week the amount of downloads remained at 32 thousands after that it sharply fell to 15 thousands by the end of the 3rd week. Nonetheless, it reached a peak by the end, about 50 thousands of downloads.

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