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Band 7+: The bar chart shows the percentage of people of different age groups who used internet banking in a European country in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a vertical bar chart titled "Age breakdown (2010*)" with the y-axis labeled "Percentage" ranging from 0 to 35 in increments of 5, and the x-axis labeled "Age (range)". The chart presents percentage data across seven age categories: "under 15" at 24.3%, "15–29" at 27.2%, "30–44" at 21.0%, "45–59" at 17.3%, "60–74" at 7.7%, "75–84" at 2.1%, and "85 and over" at 0.4%.

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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people of different age groups from 15 to 85 and over in a Europian country in 2020. The figures were measured by percentages.

It is clear that teenagers and younger individuals showed the highest percentages over the period , whereas older people recorded the lowest numbers during the period.

Between 15 and 29 age group was the most popular category with 27.2 %, followed by children at around 24.3%. The figures for middle aged ( from 30 to 44 and from 45 to 59 ) groups were 21% and 17.3% respectively.

The lowest share was held by older people who were 85 and over , at just roughly 0.4%. The figure for users of internet banking whose ages were between 75 and 84 recorded at 2.1%. In addition , 7.7% was used by group at ages from 60 to 74 .

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The report effectively covers the main trends and key data points from the chart, such as the highest percentages for younger age groups and the lowest for older ones. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'from 15 to 85 and over' but the chart includes an 'under 15' category, and the title mentions '2010' while the task specifies '2020'. Additionally, the phrase 'teenagers and younger individuals' could be more precise. The report would benefit from a clearer overview and more accurate referencing of the age groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the overview and the detailed description. The use of linking words like 'followed by' and 'in addition' is appropriate, but the flow could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect ideas seamlessly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate, with some good choices like 'proportion', 'recorded', and 'share'. However, there are a few errors, such as 'Europian' (should be 'European') and 'middle aged' (should be 'middle-aged'). The range of vocabulary is sufficient but could be expanded with more sophisticated terms. For example, instead of 'popular category', you could use 'predominant age group'. Overall, the lexical resource is good but not fully flexible or natural. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and passive voice. However, there are some errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'Between 15 and 29 age group was' (should be 'The 15-29 age group was') and '7.7% was used by group' (should be '7.7% was recorded for the group'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are unnecessary spaces before commas. With more attention to accuracy and variety, the grammar could be improved.

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