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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart showing percentage data on individuals consuming five portions of fruits and vegetables daily in the UK from 2001 to 2008. In 2001, Children's percentage is 12%, Men's 15%, Women's 22%. In 2002, Children 14%, Men 17%, Women 24%. In 2003, Children 14%, Men 18%, Women 25%. In 2004, Children 16%, Men 19%, Women 27%. In 2005, Children 17%, Men 21%, Women 28%. In 2006, Children 17%, Men 24%, Women 30%. In 2007, Children 22%, Men 26%, Women 32%. In 2008, Children 25%, Men 27%, Women 34%.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of fruits and vegetables ate by people-children,men,women in British between 2001 and 2008.

Overall, percentage of women ate the five portions of fruits and vegetables experience more than others under 7-year period whereas children shows lowest percentage under the same period of time.

In 2001, women ate over 10% of fruits and vegetables, grew up gradually until 2006 at 35% and dropped at 30% in 2008. However, from 2001 to 2003 men ate fruits and vegetables consistently around 17% which was came up over 20% in both 2006 and 2007, slight decrease at 26% in 2008.

Moreover, children ate fruits and vegetables remained stable at approximately 13% between 2001 and 2003. Furthermore, increased slowly reaching over 20% in 2007 and dropped at 23% in 2008.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fruits: 5

vegetables: 5

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the bar chart and making relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the percentage for women in 2006 and 2008). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and consider providing a more structured overview in the introduction. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information more logically, perhaps by discussing each demographic (children, men, women) separately across the entire time period, or by highlighting key trends across all demographics in each paragraph. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using "ate," consider synonyms like "consumed" or "ingested." Also, explore more sophisticated ways to describe trends, such as "a steady increase" or "a fluctuating pattern." Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. For example, "percentage of women ate" should be "percentage of women who ate" or "women's percentage." Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure will improve grammatical accuracy.

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