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Band 7+: The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart showing percentage data on individuals consuming five portions of fruits and vegetables daily in the UK from 2001 to 2008. In 2001, Children's percentage is 12%, Men's 15%, Women's 22%. In 2002, Children 14%, Men 17%, Women 24%. In 2003, Children 14%, Men 18%, Women 25%. In 2004, Children 16%, Men 19%, Women 27%. In 2005, Children 17%, Men 21%, Women 28%. In 2006, Children 17%, Men 24%, Women 30%. In 2007, Children 22%, Men 26%, Women 32%. In 2008, Children 25%, Men 27%, Women 34%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who prefer to eat five portions of fruits and vegetables every day in the UK over an eight-year period, from 2001 to 2008. Overall, the data presents the preferences of women, men, and children for each year.

In addition, women’s preferences consistently exceeded those of men and children during every year of the study. The highest percentage reached by women was 35%. The men’s group maintained the second place, while children’s preferences lagged behind.

In 2006, the trend for women’s preferences saw significant growth, hitting its peak. However, in the following years, there was a slight decline. Similarly, men’s preferences also increased each year until 2006, after which they experienced a small decrease.

The situation for children mirrored this trend somewhat; from 2001 to 2007, their preference for fruit and vegetable consumption rose gradually each year, with 2007 marking the highest point for children.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies the main trends, such as women consistently having the highest percentages. However, there is a significant issue with the interpretation of the data. The report describes the data as 'preferences,' whereas the chart actually measures the actual consumption (the percentage of people who *did* eat the portions). Additionally, the report includes inaccuracies regarding the trends; for example, it claims there was a decline for women and men after 2006, which contradicts the provided data showing a continuous increase through 2008. To improve, ensure that the distinction between 'preference' and 'actual behavior' is maintained and double-check that the described trends accurately reflect the numerical data provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, and the progression of ideas is easy to follow. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive or slightly misused. For instance, starting a paragraph with 'In addition' is more appropriate for adding information to a previous point rather than introducing a new overview or body paragraph. To improve, try using more varied transitional phrases to link trends (e.g., 'Regarding the trends for...', 'In terms of...') and ensure that the relationship between sentences is logically established through more sophisticated linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate, with terms like 'consistently exceeded', 'lagged behind', and 'mirrored this trend' showing good control. However, there is a slight over-reliance on the word 'preferences'. The task describes the percentage of people who *actually ate* the portions, whereas 'preference' implies a choice or liking, which might not be strictly what the data shows. Using synonyms such as 'consumption levels', 'rates', or 'proportions' would enhance the lexical range and precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is good, with a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. The report is largely error-free, which contributes to a high level of clarity. To reach a higher band, you could incorporate more varied structures, such as using participle clauses (e.g., 'reaching a peak of...') or more complex comparative structures to describe the gaps between the three groups more dynamically.

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