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Band 4+: The vertical bar graph gives information about the number of deaths due to car crashes in the USA in the year 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts the number of deaths due to road accidents by car in the USA across different bimonthly periods for the years 2010 and 2012: Jan-Feb (2010: 4000, 2012: 6000), Mar-Apr (2010: 5000, 2012: 7000), May-Jun (2010: 4500, 2012: 5000), Jul-Aug (2010: 4800, 2012: 5500), Sept-Oct (2010: 5200, 2012: 6000), Nov-Dec (2010: 3600, 2012: 4000).

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The vertical bar graph illustrates of Deaths due to Road Accidents by Car in USA from 2010 to 2012. The vertical bar graph gives five graphic about months in the year.

Overall, it can be seen that, USA deaths in the period given. The highest number of death was july and august in 2010 and the number around the 6000, whereas the least deaths number was january and february in 2010, that was around the 4000. Moreover the death toll was higher in 2012. March and april, september and october was same number of death in 2012.

First two months the deaths number was around the 4000. Moreover that amount rose gradually until november in 2010. That number reached the highest number in july and august, while halved after 2 month later.

Secondly 2012 started high in january and february. Next two month the number of death increased to 6100. Whereas the next two month the number fell to 4000. The next month rose again and the last two month the death toll decline to 4000. In short, last month the number of death dropped. Moreover the highest amount of death was march and sempember in 2012

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 10

death: 7

month: 6

deaths: 4

highest: 3

around: 3

moreover: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant issues with clarity, accuracy, and grammatical structure. There are several incomplete sentences (e.g., 'Overall, it can be seen that, USA deaths in the period given.') which prevent the reader from understanding the main trends. While the report attempts to compare the two years, the data presentation is often confusing and sometimes contradicts the provided visual description. To improve, focus on writing complete, cohesive sentences and ensure that your descriptions of trends (increases, decreases, peaks) are logically connected to the data points. Aim to group information more effectively to avoid repetitive sentence structures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical in its attempt to separate the two years, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by fragmented sentences and unclear transitions. Some sentences are incomplete (e.g., 'Overall, it can be seen that, USA deaths in the period given.'), which makes it difficult for the reader to follow the intended message. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices (like 'In contrast', 'Following this', or 'Subsequently') to link ideas smoothly and ensure every sentence contains a complete thought.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and repetitive (e.g., frequent use of 'number of death', 'the next two month'). There are also several errors in word choice and formation, such as 'gives five graphic' and 'death toll decline'. To reach a higher band, try to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., rise, climb, surge) and 'decrease' (e.g., drop, decline, plummet), and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used in their correct forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'september and october was same'), incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'illustrates of'), and inconsistent tense usage. Additionally, many sentences lack proper structure. I recommend practicing sentence construction, specifically focusing on how to combine simple ideas into complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions, and paying close attention to singular/plural agreement.

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Band 4+: The vertical bar graph gives information about the number of deaths due to car crashes in the USA in the year 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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