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Band 6+: The vertical bar graph gives information about the number of deaths due to car crashes in the USA in the year 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts the number of deaths due to road accidents by car in the USA across different bimonthly periods for the years 2010 and 2012: Jan-Feb (2010: 4000, 2012: 6000), Mar-Apr (2010: 5000, 2012: 7000), May-Jun (2010: 4500, 2012: 5000), Jul-Aug (2010: 4800, 2012: 5500), Sept-Oct (2010: 5200, 2012: 6000), Nov-Dec (2010: 3600, 2012: 4000).

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The bar graph provides data regarding number of individuals who lost their life in car accidents in the USA in 2010 and 2012.

Overall, the highest and the lowest number of deaths for both the years were almost same.

Initially in the year 2010, the number of demises was 4300, which slowly rose to 5200 in March-April, 5700 in May-June, and 6200 in July-August months. After that, it stayed relatively steady for the next two months, before declining to 5400 deaths in the months of November and December.

The statistics of life losses because of road incidents by car in 2010 was relatively higher compared to the statistics of former year. It was 5700 demises in January-February, and attained its peak of 6100 in March-April. In September-October months, it touched the same peak again, and then after the count of people who lost their life in car accidents plummeted to 4100 in November-December months.

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Task Response

The report identifies some key trends but includes inaccurate data, which affects the overall clarity and accuracy of the summary. The description of the data includes some incorrect figures, and the comparison between the two years could be more explicit and comprehensive. To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and directly supported by the graph. Focus on comparing and contrasting the trends between the two years more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. The flow of information could be improved by using more effective transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure a smoother reading experience. Paragraphing is present, but could be more strategically employed to group related information and enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information, but there are some instances where the word choice could be more precise or sophisticated. Consider using synonyms or alternative phrasing to avoid repetition and enhance the overall impact of the writing. Expanding your vocabulary and using more varied language will improve the quality of your report.

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The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors present that affect clarity and accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and correct usage of articles and prepositions. Reviewing grammar rules and practicing writing will help improve your grammatical accuracy and enhance the overall quality of your report.

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