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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the proportion of men and women aged 60-64 employed in four different countries in 1990 and 2000.

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The image presents bar charts detailing employment percentages for men and women aged 60-64 across Belgium, USA, Japan, and Australia for the years 1970 and 2000. For men: Belgium 1970 (42%), 2000 (79%); USA 1970 (55%), 2000 (73%); Japan 1970 (80%), 2000 (74%); Australia 1970 (60%), 2000 (69%). For women: Belgium 1970 (7%), 2000 (12%); USA 1970 (36%), 2000 (41%); Japan 1970 (43%), 2000 (54%); Australia 1970 (18%), 2000 (37%).

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The picture below contains two diagrams which demonstrate the percentage of males and females in four countries for the years 1999 and 2010.

It can be noticed that in Belgium proposition of employed men in 1990 was 4 times more than in 2000 while women’s has not significantly changed. In the USA 10 years have not brought about some drastic changes. While males’ percentage has decreased by 18 percent, females’ has flourished by 3. Almost the same situation happened in Japan, the only difference that women’s percentage decreased by 3. Australia has been effected more compared to previous two, amount of male workers declined by 30 percent and females have thrived from 16 to 18.

In summary, it can be easily noticed that men works more in the age gap between 60 and 64, but tends among them is different, while somewhere percentage of employed women increased, males’ proposition was only downgrading

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The years are incorrectly stated as 1999 and 2010 instead of 1970 and 2000, and the data for Belgium, the USA, and Japan are misreported (e.g., Belgium men's employment is said to be 4 times more in 1990 than 2000, which is reversed; the USA men's percentage is said to have decreased by 18%, but it actually increased; Japan women's percentage is said to have decreased, but it increased). The summary is somewhat relevant but includes a vague and grammatically unclear statement. To improve, ensure accurate reporting of the years, countries, and trends, and provide a clear overview of the main patterns, such as the general increase in employment for both genders in most countries, with men consistently employed at higher rates than women.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, body, and summary, but the flow is disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the picture below contains two diagrams' is vague, and the comparison between years is confusing (e.g., 'proposition of employed men in 1990 was 4 times more than in 2000' is unclear). The summary attempts to synthesize trends but lacks clarity ('tends among them is different'). To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect (e.g., one for men, one for women), and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and sometimes imprecise. Words like 'proposition' (should be 'proportion'), 'flourished' (unusual for percentages), and 'thrived' are not the most natural choices. There is also repetition of 'percentage' and 'decreased'. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'rose', 'fell', 'remained stable', 'experienced a significant increase') and more precise terms (e.g., 'employment rate', 'workers aged 60-64'). Avoid informal or overly dramatic language (e.g., 'flourished') and ensure word forms are correct (e.g., 'men works' should be 'men work').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include: 'proposition of employed men in 1990 was 4 times more than in 2000' (incorrect comparison), 'women's has not significantly changed' (missing noun), 'has been effected' (should be 'affected'), 'amount of male workers declined' (should be 'number'), and 'men works' (subject-verb agreement). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas). To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with 'while', 'whereas'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Using correct tenses (past simple for specific years) and articles ('the percentage of men') will enhance accuracy.

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