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Band 4+: The pie chart below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in the years 2008 and 2014.

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The image displays two pie charts on the percentage of volunteers by organisations for 2008 and 2014. In 2008, the percentages were: Environmental 21%, Art 18%, Sport 15%, Health Care 7%, Educational 24%, and Others 15%. In 2014, the distribution was: Environmental 29%, Art 12%, Sport 25%, Health Care 8%, Educational 17%, and Others 9%.

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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of volunteers by organizations during 2008 and 2014.

Overall, after analyzing pie chart it’s clearly visible that greatest quantity of volunteers are available in environment, education and sports. While lowest in healthcare.

The chart shows in environmental organizations 21% worker were available in 2008 which were increased to 29% in 2014. The educational sector experienced decrease in worker as in 2008 it was 24% which lowered to 17% in 2014. Meanwhile, sports had also increased from 15% to 25% during these years.

Healthcare organizations only increased quantity to 1%. However, art and other bodies had fallen the number of workers. During these years art reduced from 18 to 12% and other companies saw dramatic fall from 15 to 9%, respectively.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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organizations: 3

during: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and data, with a clear overall statement and a logical structure. However, there are some minor inaccuracies (e.g., healthcare increase is stated as 1% instead of 1 percentage point) and a few grammatical issues (e.g., 'after analyzing pie chart it's clearly visible that greatest quantity'). To improve, ensure precise language for changes (e.g., 'increased by 1 percentage point') and refine sentence structures for clarity. Overall, the task is well addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the overview is vague and does not highlight the most significant trends (e.g., the rise in environmental and sports volunteering, and the decline in educational and art). The body paragraphs are not logically organized; the second paragraph mixes increases and decreases without a clear grouping, and the third paragraph is underdeveloped. Cohesive devices are limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Meanwhile' is used incorrectly). The report would benefit from clearer paragraphing and a more systematic presentation of data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There is some repetition (e.g., 'worker', 'increased', 'decreased') and informal phrasing (e.g., 'it's clearly visible', 'had fallen the number'). The report lacks the sophisticated lexical variety expected for a high band score. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'proportion', 'share', 'rise', 'decline', 'witness') and more precise terms (e.g., 'volunteers' instead of 'worker').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Examples include: 'after analyzing pie chart' (missing article), 'greatest quantity of volunteers are available' (subject-verb agreement), 'worker were available' (number agreement), 'increased quantity to 1%' (incorrect phrasing), and 'had fallen the number of workers' (incorrect word order). There is also inconsistent use of tenses. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Using a wider range of complex structures accurately would also enhance the score.

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