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Band 5+: The bar chat below shows the proportion of renewable energy of total supply in 200, 2004, and 2007.

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The image contains a bar chart displaying renewable energy proportions as percentages of total supply for four countries over three years; Australia: 2000 at 10%, 2004 at 12%, 2007 at 9%; Germany: 2000 at 5%, 2004 slightly above 5%, 2007 slightly below 10%; Norway: 2000 at nearly 60%, 2004 at 60%, 2007 above 60%; Iceland: 2000 at approximately 45%, 2004 above 50%, 2007 under 70%.

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The bar chart illustrates about the proportion of renewable energy of total supply in 2000, 2004, and 2007. The totall percentage shows 0 to 100% on the chart. Blue colour indicate year 2000, orange colour of 2004, while gray is used for 2007.

To begin with, In Australia was 8% renewable energy of the total supply in 2000, while 10% was in 2004, and 9% was in 2007, which is less than other three countries. Furthermore, In Germany, the ratio of energy was 12% in 2000, 15% was in 2004, and approximate 18% was in 2007. In addition, the balance of the total supply of renewable energy was 62% in 2000, in 2004, the ratio increased to 64%, and in 2007 it went upward more which was 79%. In lastly, the ratio of Iceland was approximate 52% in 2000, 59 percent was in 2004, and 55% was in 2007.

In conclusion, Australia has the lowest rate of the total supply of renewable energy which is mentioned in the chart, and heighest supply of Norway.

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energy: 5

supply: 5

renewable: 4

total: 4

chart: 3

which: 3

ratio: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the countries, but it contains several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Australia's figures, Germany's figures, and Iceland's figures are not consistent with the visual description). The structure is clear with an introduction, body, and conclusion, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'illustrates about', 'In Australia was', 'heighest supply of Norway'). To improve, ensure data accuracy, use more precise language, and proofread for grammatical correctness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and some unclear references (e.g., 'In lastly'). The paragraphing is acceptable but could be improved by grouping countries more logically and using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas. To improve, use a range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variation (e.g., 'ratio', 'proportion', 'went upward'). However, there are inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'the ratio of energy', 'the balance of the total supply'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'peaked at', 'remained stable') and avoid informal or incorrect terms. Also, ensure correct spelling (e.g., 'heighest' -> 'highest'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'The bar chart illustrates about', 'In Australia was 8%', 'In lastly'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper structure. To improve, focus on sentence construction, subject-verb agreement, and using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses). Proofreading for common errors would also help.

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