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Band 5+: The chart and table below show the life expectancy in 2008 and increase in life expectancy between 1983 and 2008.

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Life expectancy" showing data for 2008, and a table titled "Increase in life expectancy" covering the period between 1983 and 2008. The bar chart shows life expectancy for four countries: Japan at 82.7, Korea at 79.2, the U.S. at 77.2, and Indonesia at 70.9. The table displays the increase in life expectancy in years for the same countries: Japan with a 5.1 year increase, Korea with 9.3, the U.S. with 3.2, and Indonesia with 14.1.

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The chart and table illustrate life expectancy in 2008 and its rising from 1983 to 2008.

Overall, while Japan recorded the largest figure of life expectancy, Indonesia stood the lowest position in 2008. In addition, between 1983 and 2008, Indonesia’s life expectancy went up to significantly with the highest years whereas U.S showed a smallest increase.

First and foremost, Japan contributed to 82.7 years old, being the highest statistics of the figure. Following by Korea and U.S, they recorded the data respectively with 79.2 and 77.2 years old and the smallest one is Indonesia, accounting for 70.9 years old.

Meanwhile, the increasing of life expectancy in Indonesia showed considerably with 14.1 years, compared with Japan and Korea categories. While Korea’s life expectancy rose up to 9.3 years old, Japan’s increasing experienced the smaller data in 5,1 years. U.S accounted for 3.2 years, around 1 third of its figure in Korea.

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years: 8

expectancy: 5

japan: 3

figure: 3

indonesia: 3

korea: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents the main data from the chart and table. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that detract from clarity. For example, 'Indonesia's life expectancy went up to significantly' is unclear, and '1 third of its figure in Korea' is inaccurate (3.2 is about one-third of 9.3, but the phrasing is confusing). Additionally, the report omits a clear comparison of the increase data for Japan and the U.S. relative to others. To improve, focus on precise language, correct grammar (e.g., 'Following by' should be 'Followed by'), and ensure all key figures are accurately reported. Overall, the main trends are covered, but the response would benefit from more coherent and accurate presentation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed comparison. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'its rising', 'the increasing of life expectancy'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'First and foremost' is used for a single point, and 'Meanwhile' is used inappropriately). To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth transitions between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'recorded', 'accounting for', 'increased'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'contributed to 82.7 years old', 'the smallest one is Indonesia', 'the increasing of life expectancy'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain phrases. To improve, use more precise and varied terms (e.g., 'stood at', 'experienced an increase', 'saw a rise') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include 'its rising' (incorrect form), 'went up to significantly' (incorrect word order), 'U.S showed' (missing article), 'the smallest one is Indonesia' (informal and incorrect), 'the increasing of life expectancy' (incorrect noun phrase), 'in 5,1 years' (incorrect decimal comma), and 'around 1 third of its figure in Korea' (incorrect fraction and comparison). The range of sentence structures is limited, and there are frequent errors in subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on using a variety of complex structures accurately and proofread for grammatical accuracy.

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