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Band 4+: The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a bar chart showcasing Switzerland birth and death rates from 1975 to 2025. In 1975, birth rate is approximately 2.2 million, death rate around 1.2 million; 1985 birth rate near 1.8 million, death rate close to 1.2 million; 1995 birth rate just under 1.8 million, death rate about 1.1 million; 2005 birth rate roughly 1.5 million, death rate approximately 1.2 million; 2015 birth rate around 2.2 million, death rate nearly 1.3 million; 2025 birth rate about 2.4 million, death rate roughly 1.4 million.

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The chart depicts statistics about Switzerland’s population between 1975 and 2025, with data collection every five years, from United Nation statitics.

Overall, birthrate is on raise throught years, contrary to peak in 1985th mortality rate it lead to regress. 2025 is year with highest birthrates, while also having lowest mortality.

1975 is a starting point with close amount child birht and deaths. 1985 is demonstrating sudden upturn for deathrate, which is slightly over 1,3 million, where birth is about 1,25 million. Current year childbirth is peaked in around 3,25 million, opposed to smallest number of fatality rate of seven hundred thousand.

1995 is year where population is started to grow at seemingly 1,7 million children born, but still with high mortality rate at 1,5 million. 2005 displays big jump in birthrates with approximately 2,7 million and significant drop to fatalities. Next date of 2015 continiues with slight increase up to 3 million and nine hundred thousand children.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies in interpreting the data, which detracts from the task achievement. The report also contains some language errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and use more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Consider organizing the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data, such as overall trends, specific periods, or comparisons between birth and death rates. Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') can also improve the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies. For example, 'birthrate is on raise throught years' could be improved to 'the birth rate generally increased over the years.' There are also instances of imprecise language, such as 'close amount child birht and deaths.' To improve, focus on using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe trends and quantities. Consider using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'birthrate is on raise throught years' and '1985 is demonstrating sudden upturn for deathrate' are grammatically incorrect. There are also issues with punctuation. To improve, carefully proofread your work for grammatical errors and consider using a grammar checker or seeking feedback from a language tutor. Focus on mastering basic grammatical structures before attempting more complex sentences.

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