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Band 6+: The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when the gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays the percentage of women in Australia giving birth to their first child across four age categories for the years 1966, 1986, and 2006. In 1966: Under 19 at 34%, 19-24 at 62%, 25-30 at 9%, and 31-34, 35-39, 40+ at approximately 2% or less each. In 1986: Under 19 at 15%, 19-24 at 39%, 25-30 at 48%, 31-34 at 10%, 35-39 at 4%, and 40+ at about 1%. In 2006: Under 19 at about 13%, 19-24 at about 28%, 25-30 at 41%, 31-34 at 29%, 35-39 at 15%, and 40+ at 5%.

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the chart illustrates data concerning the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986,and 2006.

Overall, women aged between 19 and 24 recorded higher levels of first child birth, in contrast females aged over 40 marked the lowest figures during all the years. The remaining age groups showed moderate levels of birth rates.

Looking first at diffrences between age groups, women aged between 19 and 40 marked the highest levels of giving birth to first born child. In contrast women over 40 showed less figures approximatly at 5 per cent. Meanwhile the other age groups fell within a middle range levels.

Turning to differences between years, it’s clear that some age groups declined whereas other increased.Women aged between 19 and 24 and women under 19 experinced a significant decline through the period to end the chart at approximatly 28 per cent and 12 per cent respectively less than it started, wheras age groups pf women aged between 25 to 39 had a major increas during the years. Meanwhile women over 40 remained stable with a slight fulctuation

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

women: 7

between: 6

groups: 5

birth: 4

first: 4

child: 3

levels: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes some relevant comparisons, but there are some omissions and inaccuracies. To improve, provide more specific data and avoid generalizations. Also, ensure that the data cited is accurate and reflects the information presented in the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to separate distinct ideas. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. For instance, the shift from the overall trends to specific age groups could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise. For example, using 'moderate levels' and 'middle range levels' is repetitive and lacks detail. Try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to trends and data analysis, such as 'increased significantly,' 'decreased steadily,' or 'fluctuated slightly.' Expanding your vocabulary and using synonyms will enhance the clarity and sophistication of your writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('women aged between 19 and 40 marked the highest levels'), incorrect word forms ('diffrences' should be 'differences,' 'experinced' should be 'experienced,' 'approximatly' should be 'approximately,' 'fulctuation' should be 'fluctuation'), and awkward phrasing ('less figures approximatly at 5 per cent'). Pay closer attention to proofreading and editing to correct these errors. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures accurately to improve the overall grammatical range and accuracy.

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