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Band 4+: the chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The image illustrates a bar chart featuring the percentage of British people donating to charity across five age groups for 1990 and 2010; for age group 18-25, 1990 shows approximately 17% and 2010 about 6%; for 26-35, 1990 displays around 31% and 2010 nearly 24%; for 36-50, 1990 indicates about 42% and 2010 slightly higher at 35%; for 51-65, 1990 presents roughly 35% and 2010 similar at 39%; for those over 65, 1990 records approximately 32% and 2010 nearly 35%.

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The bar chart show the propertion of British citizen who give money to charity in diffarent age group in 1990 and 2010.

Over all in 1990 the prople of 26to35 is the higest amount of donatior and 2010 the age group of 36to50 is the higest doner.Also we can see that age group of 18 to 25 it the lowest percentage of doner.

In 1990 almost 17% of people donait into charity wen it go at the age group of 26-35 it is 31%.In the age group of 36-50 the percentage is 42% that is the higest in 1990 and 2010.After it we can see a down trand age between 51-65 the percentage is 35% and less then 65 the number is 32%

In 2010 18-25 gae group the propertion is 7% that is the lowst in both year and we see a upword trand in it after it it jump into 40% in the age group of 51-65

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

group: 7

higest: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The writing could be improved by using more precise language and providing a clearer overall comparison between the two years. Also, the organization could be improved by grouping information more logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is present but could be more concise and focused. The body paragraphs jump between different age groups and years without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly', 'in contrast', 'however') to link ideas and sentences more effectively. Consider organizing the report by year or by age group to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' try 'proportion,' 'share,' or 'rate.' Expand your vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'fluctuated') and comparisons (e.g., 'significantly higher', 'slightly lower'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('donait' instead of 'donated'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms ('diffarent' instead of 'different'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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