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Band 4+: The chart below gives information on the percentage of Canadians gave money to charitable organisations by age range for the years 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart showing the percentage of Canadian donors by age group for the years 2000 and 2015. In 2000, the percentage of donors aged 18 to 24 was 5%, 25 to 34 was 20%, 35 to 49 was 30%, 50 to 64 was 35%, and 65 and over was 30%. In 2015, the percentage of donors aged 18 to 24 was 15%, 25 to 34 was 25%, 35 to 49 was 35%, 50 to 64 was 40%, and 65 and over was 35%.

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The bar chart gives information about the data of canadian donors by various age groups between 2000 and 2015

Overall,it is ckear that there was a significant increase in donors by adult and old generation,while the other age groups redyced significantly through the given period

It can be seen that in 2000, the percentage of youngest donors accounted for 20% and then the percentage of young donors reduced until 10% over the last 15 years.The figure for young adults started with nearly 29% ,hovever, it registered a substantial fail from 29% to 25 through the given period.In addition in 2000, the middle adult donors consisted of almost 39% before the experiencing a significant increase from 39% to about 34% Over the next 15 years

In constrast, the valuenteers between middle aged adults registered substantial increase from about 34 to nearly 37 through the given period,while in 2000 the data of aged donars consisted of 30,hovever,it rose slightly from 30 to almost 34 between 2000 and 2015

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The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data reporting and logical contradictions. For example, the overview states that some groups reduced significantly, yet the body paragraphs contain contradictory statements (e.g., describing an increase as a 'significant increase from 39% to about 34%'). Additionally, the specific figures provided in the report do not align with the data provided in the visual description. To improve, ensure that all trends described (increases vs. decreases) are logically consistent and that the numbers cited accurately reflect the data presented in the chart. Focus on clarity in describing trends and improving spelling and punctuation to ensure the message is coherent.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat difficult to follow due to inconsistent logical progression and punctuation errors. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'In addition', 'In contrast'), they are often used incorrectly or are accompanied by spacing errors that disrupt the flow. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences are smooth and logically sound. Pay close attention to the use of punctuation, such as placing a space after commas and periods, to improve readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'ckear', 'redyced', 'hovever', 'valuenteers', 'donars') which detract from the professional tone required for an academic report. There is also some confusion in word choice, such as using 'fail' instead of 'fall' or 'decrease'. To improve, focus on learning precise academic synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'declined', 'rose', 'fluctuated') and ensure that spelling is accurate to maintain clarity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the use of prepositions. For example, phrases like 'before the experiencing' are grammatically incorrect. Additionally, the lack of proper capitalization (e.g., 'canadian') and inconsistent punctuation affect the overall accuracy. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions and review basic rules regarding sentence boundaries and capitalization.

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