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The image shows a bar chart titled 'Household Expenses' comparing the percentage of expenses for the US, Australia, and the UK across five categories. For Food, expenses are: US 14%, Australia 15%, UK 20%. For Housing: US 26%, Australia 21%, UK 24%. For Transport: US 16%, Australia 20%, UK 15%. For Entertainment: US 12%, Australia 15%, UK 10%. For Medical: US 7%, Australia 4%, UK 2%.

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the charts illustrate the information of the family budget typically spent on five different household expenses in the US,Australia and the UK in 2012

There are 5 household shown , food, housing, transport,entertainment,medical. Firstly the family spend the most expenses in food, food has the highest persentage due to complete their daily activities,and the least food expenses are in the US ,food in the US is way cheaper than than both contries. Secondly Housing ,US has the most expenses on it ,In the US tax was very high so if they stay there for along time it will cost them a lot of money and the least expenses is on Australia ,thirdly transport Austalia has the most persentage about 20% however Uk has the least persentage only about 15%,fourth is entertaiment as a family they will need an entertaiment without it they able to feel bored. Australia has the most persentage among the countries and the least is in UK about 15%,Last but not least is medical, medical was very important for every country with medicalcare and stuff they able to heal any kind of disease , In the chart US shows us it has the most highest among the countries.

In conclusion the family had went to 3 countries also it cost them a different prices it could be more expensive or even cheaper based on the chart the most expenses they paid is the housing or the places for them to stay , they need to pay the tax,electricity and other.

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The organization is weak, with a lack of clear structure and paragraphing. The information presented is often inaccurate or misinterpreted, and there's a tendency to provide explanations or justifications that are not supported by the data. The language used is basic and contains grammatical errors, affecting clarity. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data from the chart, organizing the information logically, and using more precise language. Avoid making unsupported claims or assumptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between ideas are abrupt. The conclusion introduces information not directly supported by the chart, such as the family traveling to the countries. To improve, focus on organizing the information into clear paragraphs, using transition words to connect ideas, and ensuring the conclusion summarizes the main points from the chart.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of saying 'the most expenses,' use 'the highest percentage of expenses.' To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to finance, percentages, and comparative descriptions. Use synonyms and avoid repeating the same words and phrases excessively.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Punctuation is also used inconsistently. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully for errors. Practice constructing more complex sentences while ensuring they are grammatically correct. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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