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Band 5+: The chart below shows how the telephone subscribers in Vietnam developed throughout the year 2010.

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The image displays the number of telephone subscribers in Vietnam during 2010, charted monthly, measured in millions. January recorded 115.7; February, 118.1; March, 119.8; April, 119.9; May, 121.5; June, 123.9; July, 128.3; August, 130.6; September, 130.9; October, 131.2; November, 140.4; December, 143.7; and the final point seen is 153.7.

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The bar chart illustrates how the telephone users in Vietnam developed throughout the year 2010.

Overall,there could be seen the general upward trend in the number of thelephone users in Vietnam in 2010, measured in millions of people.

Firstly, the highest proportions were recorded in the last months, and they numbered from 147.3 to 153.7 million. Simmilary, september and october also saw high mobile subscribers, with around 142.1 to 144.4 million. This indicates that in the end of the year was the most usage of telephone subscriptions. The final months were the peak of phone subscribers in Vietnam.

In contrast, the lowest values of usage starts at the beggin of the year. Even though it can be noted that bar chart rise throughout the whole time period, it can be seen that from february to march people who use smartphones went down. However, as it can be seen on the bar chart from january to june the phone subscribers in Vietnam developed.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the trend in telephone subscribers in Vietnam during 2010, but it contains inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The description of the data is not always accurate, and there are some issues with clarity and organization. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and organizing the information logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. For instance, the transition between the overall trend and the specific data points is abrupt. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, such as grouping information about the beginning, middle, and end of the year into separate paragraphs. Using cohesive devices more effectively would also improve the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. There are instances of imprecise language, such as 'highest proportions' and 'lowest values of usage.' Consider using more specific terms to describe the data, such as 'peak' or 'trough.' Expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and data analysis would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, there are issues with subject-verb agreement ('the highest proportions were recorded'), incorrect word forms ('Simmilary'), and awkward phrasing ('people who use smartphones went down'). Correcting these errors and improving sentence structure would significantly improve the report's grammatical accuracy. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures accurately.

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