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Band 4+: The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a vertical bar chart titled "Integration problems for people living abroad (%)" with three age groups (18-34, 35-54, over 55) and four problem categories (finding somewhere to live, sorting out finances, sorting out healthcare, finding schools for my children). The 18-34 group has the highest percentage in all categories except healthcare, with the most significant being "finding somewhere to live" at approximately 36%. The 35-54 group has the highest healthcare concern at around 22%. The "over 55" group has the lowest percentages, with "finding schools for my children" at about 5%. Data based on HSBC Bank International Expat Explorer Survey 08.

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the chart show the difficulties people have when they move to a new country and how the problems vary according to people’s ages

overall, all three age groups experience the same immigration issues but the middle age group suffer from these difficulties the most

From the data of the bar chart the highest percentage of people aged 35-54 has difficulty arranging Medical Care ( 37%) and the other a groups account for lower rates.Similarly in the 35 to 54 age groups has 35% difficulty about facing with financial and the other groups account for lower rates ( 34% and 29% individually).However the 18-34 age groups find sorting out finances is the most problematic.Especially, finding School for Children is considered as the least serious integration problem. in particular only 19% of 35-54 age group has to deal with this trouble.Meanwhile, the 18-35 age groups only account for 6% and even fewer people over 55 ( 2%) have this problem

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

5.5

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but it misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the highest percentage for the 18-34 age group, which is finding somewhere to live. It also doesn't explicitly compare the percentages for each problem across the different age groups.

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4.5

The report is generally coherent, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of parentheses and the repetition of phrases like 'the other groups account for lower rates' makes the report less cohesive.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The use of 'immigration issues' instead of 'integration problems' is an example of this.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of incorrect tenses, articles, and prepositions makes it difficult to understand the message.

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