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Band 4+: The chart below shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United KIngdom in January to June.

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The image presents a line chart detailing requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June, categorized by method. For 'in person' requests, the monthly figures were: Jan 450, Feb 620, Mar 800, Apr 1250, May 1550, and Jun 1900. For requests 'by letter / email', the figures were: Jan 750, Feb 700, Mar 700, Apr 550, May 380, and Jun 380. For requests 'by telephone', the numbers were: Jan 900, Feb 800, Mar 1000, Apr 1000, May 1400, and Jun 1600.

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The line gragh illustrates requests foe information at a torist office in the United Kingdom between Janurary to June.

Overall, the most popular way was in person.The second way was by telephone and the leastest was by letter/email.

The information in person and telephone experienced increasd in popularity.The tourist prefer geting information in person which was the highest through the period haver between400 to 1850 from Jan to Jun.Getting information by telephone it was the most popular in Jan at 900 but it rose a downward trend in Feb and kept steady between Mar to Apr heaverd 1000 and sharplyincreasing to over 1400 .However,it kept raise to 1800 in Jun.

In contrast,getting information by email have less popular in Jun at 400.It Popularity decline from 700 in Jan to 400 Jun .It sharply full around 700 to 400 in may where it remain untile 400 in Jun .

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information: 5

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telephone: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the three methods of requesting information. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., '1850' instead of 1900 for in-person in June, '1800' instead of 1600 for telephone in June) and some unclear or awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the leastest', 'sharplyincreasing', 'heaverd'). The overall structure is present, but the language errors and occasional irrelevant or imprecise details detract from clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data reporting, clearer sentence construction, and proofreading for spelling and grammar. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present the data but lacks a clear and logical structure. The information is not well-organized, and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and there are noticeable lapses in coherence. To improve, create a clear overview paragraph and then organize the body paragraphs by category or trend, using appropriate linking words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'gragh', 'torist', 'Janurary', 'leastest', 'increasd', 'geting', 'haver', 'heaverd', 'sharplyincreasing', 'raise', 'full', 'untile'). There is an attempt to use some appropriate terms, but overall the range is narrow and lacks sophistication. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'rose', 'declined', 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'remained stable') and ensure correct spelling. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that significantly impede understanding. Issues include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement errors, missing articles, and incomplete sentences. Punctuation is also problematic. To improve, focus on basic sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and using a mix of simple and complex sentences accurately. Proofreading for common errors is essential.

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Band 4+: The chart below shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United KIngdom in January to June.

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