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Band 5+: The chart below shows sales of three categories of magazines (fashion, music, and sports) in a particular region over five weeks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Sales of Magazine ($ million)' showing data for three categories over five weeks. For Fashion, the sales in millions of dollars were: Week 1: 35, Week 2: 30, Week 3: 20, Week 4: 40, Week 5: 60. For Music, the sales were: Week 1: 45, Week 2: 50, Week 3: 60, Week 4: 70, Week 5: 80. For Sports, the sales were: Week 1: 75, Week 2: 100, Week 3: 110, Week 4: 100, Week 5: 120.

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The given graph depicts information about how many the amount of money is spent on types of magazines over 5-weeks period

Overall, the was an significant increase in all three categories of the expenditure on magazines. In additional, Sports was the highest figure, while the number of sale of magazines for Fashion ranked lowest among the three kinds.

The number of magazine sales in Sports started at around 78M, after which it experience a notable rise to 110M, which it was followed by a slight drop, before peaking at 12M in week 5.

42 million was spent on Music in week 1, before going up remarkably over 5-weeks period, ending at 60%. Beside that, the number of magazines sold for Fashion was at 38 million, followed by slight decrease. there was an remarkable climb in the amount of money spent on Fashion

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magazines: 4

spent: 3

number: 3

fashion: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the sales trends for the three magazine categories over the five-week period. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Sports starting at 78M instead of 75M, peaking at 12M instead of 120M) and some unclear or incorrect expressions (e.g., 'ending at 60%' instead of 80 million). The overall structure is present, but the report would benefit from more precise data reporting and clearer language. Focus on accurately presenting the figures and avoiding vague or erroneous statements. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some organizational issues. The overview is present but could be clearer. The paragraphs are not well-structured, and the progression of ideas is sometimes hard to follow. Use clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific category or trend. Linking words like 'in addition' and 'besides' are used, but transitions could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some choices are inaccurate or inappropriate (e.g., 'how many the amount of money is spent', 'the number of sale of magazines'). Repetition of 'magazines' and 'sales' could be avoided with synonyms. Work on using more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'expenditure on magazines' is acceptable but 'sales of magazines' is more common).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('the was an significant increase'), article usage ('an remarkable climb'), and tense consistency ('it experience a notable rise'). Punctuation is also problematic (missing capital letters, incorrect use of commas). To improve, review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully. Varying sentence structures would also enhance the score.

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