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Band 4+: The chart below shows the amount of money spent on fast food each week in Lakeville.

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The image shows money spent per week on fast food from 2000 to 2020 for pizza, hamburgers, and fried chicken. For pizza: 2000-$400, 2005-$420, 2010-$780, 2015-$490, 2020-$450; for hamburgers: 2000-$300, 2005-$480, 2010-$500, 2015-$430, 2020-$380; for fried chicken: 2000-$150, 2005-$250, 2010-$210, 2015-$320, 2020-$700.

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Society has been addicted to fast food for a while.People do not think about their health ad mental issues.Humans suppose that consuming lots of unhealthy products will be enabled to harm their lifestyles.For instance,by 2000 pizza had become the largest bought meal and fried chicken had become the least bought.

Ordering a lot of fast food meals is so harmful,but a person loves it.By 2005 pizza was still leading,meanwhile hamburgers had been bought regularly too.By 2010 fried chicken had declined in numbers,at the same moment pizza had reached the absolute record by 780,after all hamburgers were not decreased.By 2015 fried chicken,pizza and hamburgers came close to being pursued the same.Well,the fascinating part of this is that fried chicken was leading by 70 more than pizza.Furthermore,in 2020 it became the absolute leader in it,by the amount 700.

Sinking into it,we figured out how fast and lovely the numbers have been moving.Lately,by 2020 fried chicken started leading,and others reached the startling numbers of 450 and 350.The most amazing part of it was that pizza had become the lowest.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fried: 5

pizza: 4

chicken: 4

become: 3

hamburgers: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends in fast food spending, but it includes significant irrelevant commentary about society's addiction to fast food and health issues, which detracts from the task. The data is partially accurate, but there are inaccuracies (e.g., stating fried chicken led by 70 more than pizza in 2015, when it was actually lower) and omissions (e.g., not clearly comparing all categories across all years). The report lacks a clear overview and structured comparison, and the informal tone ('Well, the fascinating part...') is inappropriate for an academic report. To improve, focus on summarizing the main trends, accurately reporting key figures, and using a more formal, objective style.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and logical progression. It does not present an overview of the main trends, and the information is not organized in a way that is easy to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, causing the text to feel disjointed. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the report would benefit from a clear introduction, an overview paragraph, and a body that groups data logically (e.g., by time period or by food type).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often informal or inappropriate for an academic report (e.g., 'addicted', 'lovely', 'fascinating part'). There is some attempt to use a range of words, but many choices are inaccurate or unnatural (e.g., 'enabled to harm', 'pursued the same'). The report would benefit from more precise and formal vocabulary, such as 'expenditure', 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'surpassed', and 'declined'. Avoid subjective and emotional language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and word order. For example, 'ad mental issues' should be 'and mental issues', 'will be enabled to harm' is incorrect, and 'had been bought regularly too' is awkward. The range of grammatical structures is limited, and the report would benefit from using a variety of complex sentences with accurate punctuation. Proofreading and revising for grammar and clarity are essential.

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