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Band 4+: The chart below shows the average earnings of people in various areas of work in one country in 2000 and 2010. The table shows the average salary for all sectorsin the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart showing the average annual salary per full-time employee by sector and a table for the average salary across all sectors in 2000 and 2010. In 2000, the salaries were: Administration $45,000, Financial Services $110,000, Telecommunications $60,000, Tourism $20,000, Transport $40,000, and Retail/Shops $35,000. In 2010, the salaries were: Administration $50,000, Financial Services $125,000, Telecommunications $70,000, Tourism $25,000, Transport $55,000, and Retail/Shops $45,000. The table shows the average salary for all sectors was $44,000 in 2000 and $50,000 in 2010.

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The chart compares the average earnings of people who works in various areas in one country between 2000 and 2010. The table illustrates salary for all sectors in average in the given years.

overall, the highest amount of annual salary per full-time employee,by the sector of financial services in 2010 while, tourism is the lowest sector showed in the given years.

In terms of category, the highest salary in employee earn by financial services was more than 100 dollers, another higher sector was telecommunications amount is over 60dollers in the year of 2000 while, these sector annual salary incresed sharply from 2010 below more 120 dollers approximately and over 60 dollers in these two sectors.

For the remaining categories, addministration and transport are allmost similar amount earn by workers in the year 2000 over 40 dollers these are rose from 2010 in one country. on the other hand, retailshops are show a huge difference of amount in the sector between the year 2000 to 2010. and tourism is the most lower amount earned in the following years.

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the main features of the chart and table, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from task achievement. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data is often incorrect or vague (e.g., 'more than 100 dollers' instead of $110,000, and 'over 60 dollers' for telecommunications). The report also fails to clearly compare the sectors and does not accurately reference the table data for average salaries. To improve, focus on selecting key data points, using precise figures, and making clear comparisons between sectors and years. Additionally, ensure that all information is relevant and accurately reported.

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The report attempts to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The overall message is difficult to follow due to missing logical connectors and inconsistent use of cohesive devices. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure pronouns and demonstratives clearly refer to the intended nouns, and employ a range of linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') to guide the reader smoothly through comparisons.

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The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with several inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'dollers' instead of 'dollars', 'addministration' instead of 'administration', 'allmost' instead of 'almost'). There is an attempt to use some less common words (e.g., 'illustrates', 'approximately'), but these are not always used correctly. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'earnings', 'remuneration', 'sector', 'witnessed an increase') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('people who works'), incorrect verb forms ('is the lowest sector showed'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently incorrect. To improve, practice writing clear, simple sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and tense usage. Review the use of articles (a, an, the) and prepositions. Expand your range of sentence structures by using complex sentences with relative clauses and conjunctions, but ensure they are grammatically accurate.

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