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Band 5+: The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing the average hours worked per day by married men and women aged 24-44 and 45-64. For husbands aged 24-44: 7 hours (paid work), 2 hours (unpaid work at home), total 9 hours; wives aged 24-44: 4 hours (paid work), 5 hours (unpaid work at home), total 9 hours. For husbands aged 45-64: 7 hours (paid work), 1 hour (unpaid work at home), total 8 hours; wives aged 45-64: 3 hours (paid work), 5 hours (unpaid work at home), total 8 hours.

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The bar chart illustrates the average number of hour work of two aged groups (between 22 and 44 years and between 45 and 64 years) divides by gendar ( husband, wife).

Overall, both aged groups of couples work in paid jobs more than unpaid ones whereas the young group of married people has the most numbers of hour work compared to the elder one. Furthermore, married men have the significant number of hour work regardless to the age.

In terms of male gendar, male partners aged under 44 and above 45 work dayly for money just under 7.5 hours. In contrast to around 2.5 free hour work each day. In total, the young married men work more than the old ones with around 9 and 7 hours respectively.

On the other hand, the female partners, under 44 years, attend paid jobs with 6 hours dayly, which is more than the unpaid ones by only one hour. The wives aged between 45 and 64 years work more than the younger group for free or money with 6 and 4 hours dayly.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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hours: 4

years: 3

married: 3

under: 3

dayly: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but it misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the total hours worked by each group, which is a significant point of comparison. The report also doesn't fully explore the differences in paid and unpaid work between men and women in each age group.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which makes it difficult to follow the argument. The report also lacks clear transitions between paragraphs and ideas.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The report could benefit from using more precise and sophisticated language to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The report could benefit from more careful proofreading and editing.

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