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Band 5+: The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows the percentage distribution of academic qualifications between genders: Skilled vocational diploma – Females 10%, Males 90%; Undergraduate diploma – Females 35%, Males 15%; Bachelor's degree – Females 50%, Males 40%; Postgraduate diploma – Females 30%, Males 70%; Master's degree – Females 35%, Males 55%.

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The chart gives information of the different statistics in percentage of post-qualifications in Australia through males and females who held them in 1999.

Overall, most men had enhance skilled vocational diploma in universities in Australia, but least of them obtained undergraduate measurement, while most females from school received undergraduate certificate; however, they were bottomed out in skilled vocational.

In 1999, women were extremely low in receiving skilled vocational diploma compared to men at around 10% and 90% respectively; whereas, women received postgraduate diploma was approximately 30%, while men recieved at about 70%; lastly, master’s degree gave to males at 60%, while percentage of women earned it was about 40%.

In the same year, undergraduate qualifications was given to women approximately 70%, while men received at around 37%; finally, men were awarded approximately 48% in bachelor’s degree, while women obtained it at about 55%.

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The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical. The 'overall' paragraph is somewhat unclear and doesn't effectively summarize the key trends. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' can help to connect ideas more smoothly. Paragraphing could be more effectively used to group related information.

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The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'enhance skilled vocational diploma,' 'undergraduate measurement,' 'undergraduate certificate'). Expanding your vocabulary and using more specific terms related to qualifications and proportions would improve the clarity and sophistication of the report. For example, instead of 'bottomed out,' you could use 'had the lowest representation.'

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are often simple and repetitive. For example, the repeated use of 'received at around' becomes monotonous. Varying sentence structure and ensuring grammatical accuracy are crucial for improving the clarity and credibility of your writing. Pay close attention to articles (a/an/the), prepositions, and correct verb forms.

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