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Band 5+: The chart below shows the expenditure of NSW and Victoria on consumer goods in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph of consumer expenditure in 2018, measured in Australian Dollars, separated by category and region (NSW and Victoria). The categories are: Cars, Computers, Books, Cameras, Perfume. For Cars, NSW expenditure is around 450,000 and Victoria is near 375,000. Computers show NSW at about 300,000 and Victoria at 350,000. Books have NSW at approximately 225,000 and Victoria at 200,000. Cameras show NSW at roughly 175,000 and Victoria at 225,000. Perfume has NSW at about 50,000 and Victoria at 100,000.

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The bar chart describes the expense of NSW and Victoria on consumer products in 2018.

It is evident that cars in Victoria has the highest purchase than other four items left and cameras in NSW has the lowest one. The number of goods in the orange column are higher than that of those in the blue column except for perfume and computers. Moreover, the amount of cameras in NSW and Victoria is very different from the rest of the products.

The amount of people buying cars in Victoria was higher than that of those buying in NSW at around 450000$ and 400000$. Similarly, buyers in Victoria spent more money on books than NSW. Additionally, a large proportion of buyers buy cameras in Victoria stood at 350000$, which was slightly higher than that of NSW. On the oher hand, a vast majority of people buying computers in NSW was higher than of those in Victoria about 50000$. Both coutries have a smaller number of perfume buyers at around 200000$ and 150000$.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

victoria: 7

higher: 4

cameras: 3

those: 3

buying: 3

buyers: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The report provides an overview of the consumer expenditure in NSW and Victoria in 2018, highlighting the differences in spending on various products. However, there are some inaccuracies and the report lacks specific data from the visual information. Additionally, the report is slightly under the word count requirement.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is generally coherent and the progression of ideas is understandable. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the organization of information, leading to some confusion. Additionally, there is a lack of cohesive devices to link ideas and information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The report demonstrates an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and some awkward word choices. There is also a need for more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the data effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There is evidence of a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the report. Additionally, there are issues with punctuation and sentence construction that affect the overall clarity of the report.

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