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Band 6+: The chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive in three regions of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart titled "Causes of Worldwide Land Degradation," showing the percentage of degraded land by cause for North America, Europe, and Oceania. For the cause of Over-grazing, the percentages are: North America 1.5%, Europe 5.5%, and Oceania 11.3%. For Deforestation, North America is 0.2%, Europe is 9.8%, and Oceania is 1.7%. For Over-cultivation, North America is 3.3% and Europe is 7.7%. For the "Other" cause category, North America is 0.2% and Europe is 7.1%. Oceania has no recorded percentage for Over-cultivation or Other.

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The bar chart illustrates the causes of worldwide land degradation citing North America, Europe and Oceania quantifying the land in proportions.

Overall, A vast region of Oceania has been rendered agriculturally unproductive due to overgrazing. While deforestation and over-cultivation were the most significant causes in Europe.

In Oceania, Overgrazing has negatively impacted on about 15% of the land which is an enomous percentage compared to that of Europe and North America. While deforestation and other causes contributed to this problem at 2% and 8% respectively, overcultivation had absolutely no recorded role in reduction of productivity in Oceania.

Europe on the other hand has majorly lost productivity as a result of Deforestation which accounted for about 8%. This was a higher proportion compared to 1.8% in Oceania and a dismal 0.1% in North America. However, Europe recorded the highest proportion of damaged land from other causes of upto 7% while the other two countries had a negligible figures os below 1%.

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causes: 4

oceania: 4

other: 4

north: 3

america: 3

europe: 3

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deforestation: 3

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The report addresses the task by describing the main causes of land degradation in the three regions and makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Oceania overgrazing at 15% instead of 11.3%, deforestation in Europe at 8% instead of 9.8%, and North America deforestation at 0.1% instead of 0.2%). Additionally, the report omits the 'Other' category for North America and Europe, and does not mention the absence of over-cultivation in Oceania. The structure is clear, but the data errors and omissions detract from the overall accuracy. To improve, ensure all data points are correctly reported and include all categories for each region.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'A vast region of Oceania' is vague, and the transition between paragraphs could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are long and convoluted. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, use a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. There are some errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'enomous' for 'enormous', 'overcultivation' vs 'over-cultivation', 'upto' for 'up to'). The report uses some good phrases like 'rendered agriculturally unproductive' and 'negligible figures', but there is room for more sophisticated and accurate vocabulary. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Also, avoid informal or imprecise terms like 'majorly'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'has negatively impacted on about 15%' should be 'has negatively impacted about 15%' (remove 'on'), and 'a negligible figures' should be 'negligible figures'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a variety of sentence structures with accurate grammar. Pay attention to singular/plural consistency and correct use of prepositions.

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