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The image shows monetary aid (billion dollars) from four organizations (A, B, C, D) to developing countries from 2008-2011: Organization A- 2008: 0.5, 2009: 1.0, 2010: 0.9, 2011: 0.6; Organization B- 2008: 1.0, 2009: 1.4, 2010: 2.5, 2011: 2.1; Organization C- 2008: 0.6, 2009: 1.5, 2010: 1.1, 2011: 1.3; Organization D- 2008: 0.3, 2009: 0.4, 2010: 0.4, 2011: 0.2.

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The bar chart illustrates the monetary aid from 4 different organisations to the developing countries between 2008 and 2011,measured in billion of dollars.

Overall, organisation B donate the highest amount of aid and shared steady increase over time.In contrast organisation D shares the lowest amount to aid and with passage of time it remain deficient while the other two organisation their levels fluctuate only slightly.

Organization A provide 0.6 billion of dollars aid in 2008 before moving to 0.9 billion od dollars in 2009 followed by the remaining two years the figure remain stable to around 0.7 billion.In contrast organisation B which countinously grow and rise from 1.3 billion in 2008 to 2.6 billion in 2011 making it largest donor of all the time.

Organisation C donated between 1.2 and 1.7 billion dollar over the period of four years.its contribution peaked in 2009 before declining to its initial level in 2011.Organisation D donates the smallest amount of aid starting from 0.6 billion in 2008 before droping to 0.3 billion in 2011, despite slightly recovered in 2010.

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The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but contains several inaccuracies in data (e.g., Organization A's 2008 value, Organization B's 2008 and 2011 values, Organization D's values) and some unclear phrasing. Focus on accurately reporting the data and improving clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, cohesion is sometimes weak due to unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, 'the other two organisation their levels fluctuate only slightly' is confusing. Use clearer linking words and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single organization or trend. Paragraphing could be improved by separating the overview from the details more distinctly.

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The vocabulary is adequate but limited and repetitive (e.g., 'aid', 'billion'). There are some inappropriate word choices ('donate' instead of 'provided', 'deficient' instead of 'lowest'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'contribution', 'funding', 'assistance') and more precise terms (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined'). Avoid informal phrasing like 'all the time'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('organisation B donate'), tense inconsistency ('donated' vs 'donates'), and incorrect plural forms ('billion of dollars'). Sentence structures are often simple or flawed. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (complex, compound) and proofread for basic errors. Pay attention to articles and prepositions.

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