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Band 5+: The chart below shows the nimbers of women in futher education in Britain in three periods.

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The image presents data on men and women in further education in Britain, with figures in thousands. For males, the numbers for part-time and full-time education were, respectively: 1000 and approximately 140 in 1970/71; approximately 860 and 180 in 1980/81; and approximately 910 and 250 in 1990/91. For females, the corresponding figures were: approximately 750 and 100 in 1970/71; approximately 820 and 220 in 1980/81; and 1100 and 250 in 1990/91.

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The chart below demonstrate the number of males and females in further education in Britain across three different periods, indicating wether they studied full-time or part-time. Overall part-time education was more popular than part time for both genders in three periods.

When In 1970 and 71 about million men studying part-time education, around women 700 thousand educated here.However in 1990 and 91 women which studied part time job is more than men somewhere around 100 thousands.Around 1980 and 81 both gender is almost the same.

Regarding full-time education both gender men and women experienced growth. The number of men is surge from approximately 100 thousand 1970/71 to around 250 thousand in 1990 and 91. Similarly the number of women who studied full-time is also increased from 50 thousand 1970/71 to around 150 thousand over the same period

To sum up, women illustrate the most notable growth in further education especially in part-time job.

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education: 5

women: 5

thousand: 5

part-time: 4

around: 4

number: 3

studied: 3

full-time: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task, providing a general overview of the trends in further education for men and women in Britain across three time periods. The report identifies key trends and makes some comparisons between the genders and types of education (full-time vs. part-time). However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, and the analysis could be more detailed. To improve, ensure data accuracy and provide more specific comparisons and analysis of the trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction and conclusion are present but could be more effective in summarizing the key trends. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs need improvement to enhance coherence. For example, the shift from the overview to the detailed analysis of each period feels abrupt. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. There is a lack of precision in describing the data, which affects the clarity of the report. For instance, using more specific terms to describe increases and decreases, and avoiding vague language like 'somewhere around' would improve the lexical resource. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. Correcting these errors and varying sentence structure would significantly improve the grammatical accuracy and range. Pay close attention to proofreading and editing to eliminate these mistakes.

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