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Band 5+: The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industry in one UK city between 1989 and 2009.

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The image contains a bar chart illustrating the number of jobs across four sectors for five specified years. In 1989, the job numbers were: Restaurants 1100, Hotels 1050, Sport and leisure 900, and Travel and tour 800. For the year 1994, the figures were: Restaurants 1280, Hotels 1400, Sport and leisure 700, and Travel and tour 1050. In 1999, the data was: Restaurants 1400, Hotels 1220, Sport and leisure 1050, and Travel and tour 900. For 2004, the values were: Restaurants 1600, Hotels 1080, Sport and leisure 900, and Travel and tour 700. Finally, in 2009, the job numbers were: Restaurants 1280, Hotels 1050, Sport and leisure 700, and Travel and tour 400.

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The bar graph below illustartes the aspect of touristy professions in one uk town between 1989 2009.

Overall, it is evident that the largest number of jobs recorded was restaurants in 2004. One of the most distinguishing features is that restaurants had a sizeable portion regarding to the number of jobs in 1989 ,1999,2004 and 2009 . The previous mentioned years followed the same trajectory with a similar order of classified jobs.

In 1989 ,1999 ,2004 and 2009 there was an obvious downward trend , starting by 1989 where the number of jobs fell gradually from just over 1000 in restaurants to exactly 800 jobs in travel and tour. In addition to 1999 and 2009 when the decline rate was approximately the same with a less dramatic dips in 1999 , in 1999 restaurants accounts for 1400 jobs and it declined moderately into over 800 jobs in travel and tour ,while in 2009 restaurantes recorded was also the highest,albeit just over 1200 then it dropped to 400 in travel and tour. In 2004 when jobs’s number rejistered its peak in restaurants then it followed the same order of last previous years’s jobs .

on the other hand , in1994 the ubiquitous job in that city was hotels that its recorded was 1400 folowed then by restaurants , travel and tour and finally sport and leisure.

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The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the sectors, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the statement that restaurants had the highest number of jobs in 1989, 1999, 2004, and 2009 is correct, but the description of the trends in those years is somewhat vague and not fully accurate (e.g., the decline in 1989 is described as 'gradual' but the data shows a steady decrease). Additionally, the report omits specific data for several years and sectors, and the description of 1994 is incomplete. The overall structure is clear, but the language contains errors and informal expressions that affect clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are covered accurately, use more precise language, and avoid informal phrasing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward transitions. For example, phrases like 'The previous mentioned years followed the same trajectory' and 'In addition to 1999 and 2009 when the decline rate was approximately the same' are confusing. The paragraphing is not consistently managed, and the final paragraph starts with 'on the other hand' without a clear contrast. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph has a single main idea, and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more accurately.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'distinguishing features', 'downward trend', 'decline rate'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices. For instance, 'illustartes' is misspelled, 'touristy professions' is informal, 'sizeable portion regarding to' is ungrammatical, and 'rejistered' and 'folowed' are misspelled. The range of vocabulary is limited, and some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'the same order'). To improve, use more precise and varied terms (e.g., 'tourism-related sectors', 'experienced a decline', 'peaked at'), and proofread for spelling errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('one uk town' should be 'one UK town'), incorrect verb forms ('restaurants accounts for' should be 'restaurants accounted for'), and run-on sentences. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and word order. The range of grammatical structures is limited, with many simple sentences and some incomplete ideas. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with relative clauses), ensure subject-verb agreement, and pay attention to punctuation (e.g., commas and periods).

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