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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of energy produced from renewable sources in five different countries in 2020. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the main features of the data and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Energy produced from renewable sources (%)" for the year 2020. The vertical axis, labeled "percentage," ranges from 0 to over 40. The horizontal axis, labeled "country," shows data for five countries: Germany at approximately 31%, Australia at approximately 27%, China at approximately 11%, India at approximately 8%, and Brazil at approximately 41%.

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The given chart describes the percentage of renewable energy sources consumption by five countries in 2020 to produce the energy.

Brazil has produce approximately 40% of energy from the renewable energy sources which shows it is the first country to produce maximum energy from the energy sources. The second and third one are Germany and Australia respectively to generate the high percentage energy from renewable sources.

China and India shows the lowest percentages of energy production from renewable energy sources which are approximately 10%.

To conclude the report, Brazil shows the highest and India shows the lowest percentage of energy production from renewable energy sources which are about 40% and 10% respectively.

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energy: 10

renewable: 5

sources: 5

shows: 4

percentage: 3

produce: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the bar chart and making some comparisons. However, there's room for improvement in terms of detail and organization. To enhance the report, consider including more specific data points and comparisons, and structuring the information more logically. For example, you could group countries based on their percentage ranges and discuss the implications of these differences. Also, ensure that the language is precise and avoid generalizations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it somewhat difficult to follow the information. Consider organizing the data into more structured paragraphs, perhaps one focusing on the countries with high percentages and another on those with lower percentages. Use transition words to connect ideas and improve the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'produce' and 'energy sources,' try incorporating synonyms like 'generate,' 'derive,' or 'obtain,' and 'renewable resources,' 'green energy,' or 'sustainable power.' This will enhance the sophistication of your writing. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the,' 'a,' 'an'). For example, 'Brazil has produce approximately 40%' should be 'Brazil has produced approximately 40%.' Proofreading carefully and using grammar checking tools can help improve accuracy.

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